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Lunawolf44 [2017-05-29 03:00:48 +0000 UTC]
Aaaaa that's so sad ;^;
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Enderquus In reply to Lunawolf44 [2017-05-29 18:22:26 +0000 UTC]
Yis, and he has not been handling it well, but he is fortunately getting help. So there's a plus.
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MidgetMaja [2017-05-14 20:51:58 +0000 UTC]
Nyohohoohohoho my heart!!!!!!! Poor Icky!!!!
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Enderquus In reply to MidgetMaja [2017-05-14 20:56:22 +0000 UTC]
It's illegal for my children to be happy.
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TheNervousMedic [2017-05-14 11:20:53 +0000 UTC]
I think i might cry.
Hot damn this was beautiful Quus ^///^ thank you so much for drawing my little yellow bean... let's hope it really was adoption and she didn't just vanish into the woods.
This almost makes me sad about leaving Wyngro, but it's a beautiful story to end on none the less ^///^
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Enderquus In reply to TheNervousMedic [2017-05-14 15:26:47 +0000 UTC]
Adoption wouldn't be totally out of the question, if that was her parents intention upon returning, but is it adoption if it's her original parents?
Thank you, the original ending was about how the world toyed with him and he would not let it happen again, which either comes off as determined or sinister. I couldn't pass up the chance for an Icarus reference though.
Also, totally blanked on tagging you up until I was already in bed last night, my bad.
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TheNervousMedic In reply to Enderquus [2017-05-14 16:14:40 +0000 UTC]
hahaha XP it's alrighty boop XD you were tired!!!
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TheSapphireDragones [2017-05-14 04:59:40 +0000 UTC]
*heart audibly shatters *
The poor little lord
This was so beautiful to read bean, i love how it ties to the story of Icarus at then end, (considering IT IS his name)
A+++++++++ work
Would cry again
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Enderquus In reply to TheSapphireDragones [2017-05-14 15:33:40 +0000 UTC]
Β This eager band aid shall gladly help mend your heart.
Thank you, in the initial draft, it was going to end with "He would not let it happen again", which could either be seen as determination or something more sinister, but I couldn't pass up on the Icarus reference.
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DesigningDreamer [2017-05-14 04:15:58 +0000 UTC]
That was so great though! I loved the story!
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WolfFlufflers24 [2017-05-14 03:20:37 +0000 UTC]
SOO SAD POOR BB!!!!
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Enderquus In reply to WolfFlufflers24 [2017-05-14 15:40:09 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, life has not treated him kindly.
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Novatonix [2017-05-14 03:16:21 +0000 UTC]
Poor Icky, i wants to hug him
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Enderquus In reply to Novatonix [2017-05-14 15:43:23 +0000 UTC]
See, now there in lies the conflict storming in Icarus's mind. On the one hand, he can try doing the only other thing he can think of to become stronger to protect anyone that would come close. On the other hand, he could push people away so he's not hurt again if he loses them. Even a simple hug is a struggle of choices.
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Novatonix In reply to Enderquus [2017-05-14 15:47:06 +0000 UTC]
Mur the poor bb. But a very interesting conflict
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goldenscalez [2017-05-14 03:03:59 +0000 UTC]
*heart cracks open*
waaaaaaaaaaaa
this is so touching
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Enderquus In reply to goldenscalez [2017-05-14 15:46:32 +0000 UTC]
Β Here's an eager to assist band aid for that heart.
Thank you. ^w^
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Musicalmutt2 [2017-05-14 02:59:21 +0000 UTC]
oh god this is perfect ;-; Poor baby!!
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Enderquus In reply to Musicalmutt2 [2017-05-14 15:47:11 +0000 UTC]
Aaaa, thank you~ Yis, verr sad, unfortunate bibi.
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