HOME | DD

endofeternity — Euphoria

Published: 2005-03-22 03:47:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
Redirect to original
Description Can you feel it running through me?

Your fingers trace my veins
Barely touching the skin at first
(It rises just a bit to meet you halfway)

Deoxygenated blood races through
My skin gives gently in response to your touch
It’s almost to my heart then,

Your fingers pinch it shut.

Pulse
after
pulse
pounds against
No match for your strength,
But my heart continues to strain.

     I panic,    but can’t let go
Carbon dioxide floods my system
My back   c h
             r     e
           a          s in ecstasy

Organs  start  to  shut  down
Fingernails dig into your skin

Brain   begins   to   fail
But... I... won’t... stop... believing.

Lungs    are    screaming    in    a g o n y
And it all fades to black.

I turn blue, and go
       limp
in your arms.
You smile and close my eyes,
Kiss my forehead and walk away,
Mission accomplished.

Just another martyr for love.
Related content
Comments: 12

Theft-of-thought [2005-04-13 21:00:10 +0000 UTC]

amazing peice sweetie, it was emotional and raw, as well as deep. great write. i have no complaints. loved this one.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

endofeternity In reply to Theft-of-thought [2005-04-15 09:53:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Theft-of-thought In reply to endofeternity [2005-04-18 15:29:11 +0000 UTC]

no no no.... thank you for sharing such a beautiful peace, and givin us all a glimpse at ya...

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

spaztikk [2005-03-31 08:01:43 +0000 UTC]

goddamn i love how you layout cirtain words or letters... just makes it that much better.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

endofeternity In reply to spaztikk [2005-04-03 09:46:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks Cavan

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

PerpetuallySmiling [2005-03-25 03:24:34 +0000 UTC]

The combination of the imagery is amazing, and the feel of it is...um, at a loss for words. Great piece.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

endofeternity In reply to PerpetuallySmiling [2005-03-25 06:01:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ImmortalSlayer [2005-03-22 15:00:21 +0000 UTC]

oh gods. . . . .it just LOOKS so much more amazing than it sounded last night!!!! it feels so. . . .right there! so tangible. hun, you are pumping out some amazing work right now! keep it coming!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

endofeternity In reply to ImmortalSlayer [2005-03-23 04:31:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

hausfrau [2005-03-22 09:37:39 +0000 UTC]

Amazing...it reminds me of a line from a Pat Benatar song: Hell is for Children

<>

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Nohbudy [2005-03-22 06:44:39 +0000 UTC]

I cant help thinking about this over and over. It is awsome to see that your back and pumping out more magic like this!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

endofeternity In reply to Nohbudy [2005-03-22 08:20:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you...I'm really glad I can write again...two months of nothing and then both of these back to back...I'm a semi-happy camper

👍: 0 ⏩: 0