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Published: 2003-10-16 07:22:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 23
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Description             No
            Not this time
            I convinced myself
            I could keep the hurt at bay

          Yes
          Deny them
          Those feelings so deep within
          The ones that wrack my entire being

        Never
        Never will anyone
        Be good enough
        Than what I know I can’t have.

      Please
      Just try
      I’m willing to give you everything
      From a kiss, to the essence of my soul

    I
    Want so badly to be
    The perfect match for you
    The one you choose to give your heart to

  Never
  Never will I be the one
  The one good enough for you
  The one you know you want to have

                                                                            And I fall.
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Comments: 4

deadwite [2003-10-17 21:31:19 +0000 UTC]

damnnnnnnnnnnnnn love it love it! great set up and eveything.. wonderful wonderful!!!!

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endofeternity In reply to deadwite [2003-10-18 01:31:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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imageek [2003-10-16 15:30:03 +0000 UTC]

quit being better than me! *grins*

great stuff, as usual. i like how you set it up, each stanza closer and closer to the margin, and then the last one, just one line; very effective. were doin stuff like that in engrish right now actually...

very good

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endofeternity In reply to imageek [2003-10-16 16:56:58 +0000 UTC]

I am not better than you! Sheesh...thanks for all the compliments...

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