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Published: 2003-11-17 01:36:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 57; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description I told you no the first time
And you pleaded and cried

So I detached myself and gave in
It was the worst decision I could have made

You called like you said you would
We agreed to be just friends

Phone calls were made
Conversations were held

I told you I’d found someone else
You made it clear you were upset.

Then one day you told me
You were coming back to town.

I tried to ignore your calls
I really didn’t want to see you

That afternoon I picked up the phone
And gave into your pleading

I sat across the room from you
You kept advancing forward

I told you no over and over
It didn’t matter- no one heard

I gave in, you took over
I lay there on my back in misery

I can’t take enough showers
I’ll never feel clean enough

I’m crying on the inside
And I feel as if no one will understand

I’m hurting so badly…
I feel so….
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Comments: 6

Yuyuakari [2006-02-13 03:39:01 +0000 UTC]

This brings back bad memories for me......

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t-w-i-g-g-y [2005-08-24 17:26:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow... your openness is admirable. Such a touching piece...
I don't know what else to say, I just wanted you to know your words touched me greatly.

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imageek [2003-11-17 02:47:25 +0000 UTC]

yay! more poetry...

yet again, i lived this poem, i went through a frighteningly similar experience

excellent work as usual

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tryingtobe [2003-11-17 02:39:58 +0000 UTC]

oh I have felt this way so many times. Dont worry love, things work out. Everything happens for a reason? Learn from your mistakes?
Great Art. Sometimes it life has to hurt so much to get the great art.
If this is what art is, I dont want to feel it.... sorry random thought of the day.

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endofeternity In reply to tryingtobe [2003-11-17 05:11:36 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant...as usual...

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deadwite [2003-11-17 02:19:16 +0000 UTC]

=X damn i really like how you concluded this.. i felt similar in the past to some people in my life.. i like it!!! good job.. keep it up

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