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Enigmatic-Machine — Hazel Eyes
Published: 2011-01-03 06:23:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 237; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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You, with hazel eyes, see our souls:Dissected veins and pumping hearts.
There lies my love and my pain.
We played in this world and our roles
We took and did we ever play the parts.
Tearful words fall, "Love never again."
Bitterness in words and apathy
Fill this dark abyss, my home,
Where you slept and I love.
In my memories you will be lovely:
Forever, wherever I musingly roam,
I will remember that playful shove.
Knocked off my feet and stranded
To idly stare and ponder yesterday
Past and imagine the future.
The mind and heart have ended
The fight to understand melancholy
And your heart to capture.
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Comments: 3
Eloquently written, hun.
Not much I would suggest to change, though I figure you have a better idea on what you would want to revise.
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Thank you 
I have not got around to looking it over as of yet; it just came out as I wrote it within 30 minutes and just thought in embodied what I felt at the time. I will have to sit down and ponder -- so busy with everything!
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I know the feeling, well, I can't wait to see what you come up with, if you change much at all
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