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ENKI-ONE — MAC FRIGGIN 10
Published: 2009-12-27 22:53:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 576; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 20
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[link]my entry. vote. hope they include it. dont see why they wouldnt seeing that the battle doesnt get posted till tomorrow. feedback very welcome.
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this looks awesome, it would look better if the letters were joined together
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yeah, yeah, i said noone really burns in the mac10 battle - and i really meant it.
in your case too. where do i start?
first - the piece don't looks like a unit to me, the letters all stand kind of alone. no connections or connecting arrows or something.
the C looks a little abandoned. and the M has these "metallic" sheets, which has no other letter.(these points are missing)
then there are some details i don't feel: the fissures should be done cleaner, the tags distract from the piece and look a little sloppy. the blocks aren't exatly pointing to the vanishing point, additionally i don't think the coloring fits together - orange and purple fits fine, but mixing them both with green is a little.....risky.
but the main point of critique is that unit thing i mentioned in the beginning. M and A are cuddling, the C kinda don't belongs to them. the problem is this huge snail-swing on the right side of the A, which makes it impossible for the C to "join" the M and the A.
i don't wanna sound priggish or pedantic, but i need to be keen about a style to call it a burner. in your case they are too many points of critique to make your sketch perfect, to make it a burner - at least in my eyes. keep it up homie
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heeeeeelll yeah yeah yeah your making some fine points man fine points indeed. only thing ill defend myself on is the color scheme. the limeish green went dry on me, thats why there is tan in the first place. but the rest of it, good advice. ive improved since 'seco' tho huh? haha thanks bro!
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you are lucky you got someone to actually give you feedback and describe what bad points they reckon are in this and then how to improve them and then also give you a compliment.
Someone unrespected nobody on DA commented on my 3D wildstyle graffiti drawing and just wrote it looks like CRAP, has no style and laughed at it which is apart of me so he laughed at me as well, he gave no reason or feedback as to why my graffiti drawing was CRAP????
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what a douche bag. he needs to die.
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thanks myth you been bustin some sick characters lately man!
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Hey thanks man, nice of ya' to say man!
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I already voted for you my dude.. fuckin dope right here bro.
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thas right! thas right! thanks man! unit 6 till death!!!
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appreciate it. i was nervous bout the liquid structure at first but it came together okay after all
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yeah man came out nice...its good to push yourself to do new shit!!
you got my vote mate!
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thanks man i appreciate it!
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Wow!! That is perfection!
I was woundering if you can tag my name "Andy"? Thank you
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note me well work something out!
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Haha ok.
So can u tag my name"Andy"?
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hope it makes it through! it's a strong entry.
Nice to see you back on, I read that journal of yours a while back.
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appreciate it man, good to hear from you again!
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word man thanks. dont forget to vote
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hopefully theres some other nice entrys, ill have a geez wen its up
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