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Ennuiiunne — a cup of rain
Published: 2009-02-05 07:57:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description once, I caught the rain from the sky
in a paper cup from a fast food outlet.
you always loved the rain,
and storms. just the way you loved me:
violent unpredictable elusive beautiful.
(i think that day the rain sunk into my bones
and i was cold every day after that.)

once, i showed you my cup of rain
straight from the sky.
rain before it had hit the ground,
before it became just water.
you kissed the air above your palm
and closed your fist.
you opened the lid of my cup of rain
and emptied that loved air inside.
(i didn’t open that cup again,
not once.)

once, you kissed me, like you kissed the air,
and i didn’t feel it that time either.
sometimes i wondered if
you really had kissed the air because
i could never feel that warmth i expected
from your honey mouth.

and then you left.

(i opened my cup of rain that day,
and felt your kiss flutter through my window.)
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Comments: 15

YouInventedMe [2009-02-06 02:34:20 +0000 UTC]

the bits in parentheses tie the whole thing together nicely


xo!

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Ennuiiunne In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-02-08 04:49:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dearly.

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goth-angel-anya [2009-02-05 17:12:35 +0000 UTC]

sigh....
simply sigh....

also you and your boyfriend seem wonderful together *double sigh* sigh with a smile and sigh with a 'i wish i had that'...

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Ennuiiunne In reply to goth-angel-anya [2009-02-08 04:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Smiles, thank you.

We do make quite the crazy pair. He's not quite so poetic as I make him out to however, just randomly does and says bizarre amazingly beautiful things now and again. which I then plagarize in my writing and call it my own . He does on occasions drive me absolutely nuts with frustration but I do love him very much. Don't worry, some random fellow out there (most likely dark, handsome and preferably Italian with a name like Ferrari) is waiting there for you, my dear.

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goth-angel-anya In reply to Ennuiiunne [2009-02-11 09:06:37 +0000 UTC]

OMG i havent laughed that hard in ages some dark tall italian guy named ferrari! CLASSIC!

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Ennuiiunne In reply to goth-angel-anya [2009-02-11 12:30:48 +0000 UTC]

Hehe awesome Very glad to hear it. So hope there really is an italian guy named Ferrari out there. So gonna fight you for him now

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goth-angel-anya In reply to Ennuiiunne [2009-02-12 12:50:07 +0000 UTC]

hahaha awww doesnt sound my type love you can have him ill just watch his gorgeous body from a distance(im assuming he's got one)

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Ennuiiunne In reply to goth-angel-anya [2009-02-13 08:56:28 +0000 UTC]

hahahah lololollll for sure he does! Like he's damn gorgeous That made me crack up. No no it is okay, I already got my Ferrari, not dark or Italian unfortunately, although I am working on getting that changed

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goth-angel-anya In reply to Ennuiiunne [2009-02-17 16:19:40 +0000 UTC]

oooooohhhhh O_o

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Amateur-Kunoichi [2009-02-05 11:01:53 +0000 UTC]

HOLLY BANANAS!!!!! ITS AMAZING! as always! but geez girl this is absolutely fantastic! I could read that a hundred times over and still love the beauty in it! great job! (you always do a great job!)

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Ennuiiunne In reply to Amateur-Kunoichi [2009-02-05 11:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha thank you. I really appreciate it. Personally, I think it's a pile of crap, but i'm really glad you like it

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Amateur-Kunoichi In reply to Ennuiiunne [2009-02-12 06:38:34 +0000 UTC]

you think that all of your work is crap! but its NOT! your work is amazing and I dont bother to waste my time complimenting if i dont actually mean it! so ill say it again. ITS AWESOME!!! I LOVE IT! (i actually want to do an artwork based on it when i get the time to if thats ok with you?)

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Ennuiiunne In reply to Amateur-Kunoichi [2009-02-12 07:26:09 +0000 UTC]

Haha no no now and then I come across something I really like that i've written, but sometimes I just won't like it at all. Terribly temperamental. Oh that would be so cool. I'd love to see it. Thanks so much.

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ImmortalNobody [2009-02-05 09:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful.

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Ennuiiunne In reply to ImmortalNobody [2009-02-05 09:45:09 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so.

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