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[link] next pageah, I see, he was talking to David's guardian angel. Who is, as I’ve written in the script: totally, totally gay looking.
Actually I’ve just held onto that spiffy 90s look, since I don’t think their look varies that much, they’re too goody goody; but Mr E likes messing with this one, cause he ain’t too bright.
David is the guy that Mr E is assigned to for his muse duty, but as you see, he’s kinda tired of his role and prefers to take the piss instead.
Enjoy guys, thanks for the support.
Forgotten Muse- Tanya Roberts
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Rofl I love Mr. E!! He's got some of the best lines I've ever heard!
"Are you sure about that? Cause I could try a piano next... or even a whole orchestra!"
(I know you don't need me to repeat the lines I liked, seeing as you WROTE them, but hey, that's what I do.)
I need a muse like him.
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thanks hun, that's good to hear.
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I am intrigued by this new storyline ~ and I love the angel's font (who, by the way, reminds me of that guy from the early 90's Diet Coke ads)
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Is it bad to want to have sex with a guardian angel...?
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hehe very funny xD
i like the guardian angel design btw :3
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I'm glad he's supposed to be gay looking, because I sort of felt bad for thinking it for a second! But come on, it's hard to not look feminine with big beeeeeeeautiful white wings and a blonde do n__n <3
I love Mr E. He's a complete douche, but he has a weird charm about him!
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He isnt gay. More the perfect example of Hitlers ubermensch. I mean the baby blue eyes and the blond hair. XP
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AGHHHH! MUSE TALKING TO A GUARDIAN ANGEL, THIS IS AWESOME! :3 :3
Oh god, there is so much awesome here I can't even begin to explain. XD My anti-muse Caefed will have to buy Mr. E a pint someday. XD XD XD
I'm sure I've said this before, but I love how your comic panels and action flows~
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Haha, that angel is so awesome :'D Even if does look a little, well, gay.
So that's what Mr. E was up to! D:
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...how do you write these things?!
xD
I'm lol'in' over here!
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Can I marry him?83 JK!JK!XD
But all kidding aside love this...its always fun to tick goody goody two shoes off~
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thanks very much, and it is isn't it. hehe.
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Welcome
They are the best one to piss off and so easy sometimes too~
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ahahaa last pannel comment is great ^_^ you're very talented with dialog and art :3
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aw, thanks so much hun. I'm trying to get better at it.
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seems like trying to is working out great for you
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Hm. Guardian angels and muses, not demons. I love it. A new twist on an old classic. Can't wait to read more.
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well, the whole story's not about that, infact this is the only time this guardian angel does. he's basically just a way of presenting to the readers how he's doing his job and Mr E isn't.
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Mr. E is just made of awesome. Why would your muse be out to hurt you? Maybe he's bored of you!
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well, he's not out to hurt David, physically he can't. He's just using it as a ruse to piss off his guardian angel, he's bored and even though he won't admit it, a little lonely.
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Ouch. I can relate with the lonely thing. That is not fun.
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I love this comic so hard. You did a really great job of positioning the characters inside the panels on this page. They're having a conversation from quite a distance, but you still managed to get both of them in the panels in several different ways, and they both still interact with each other really well. I'm still fighting to get a handle on that, m'self.
The exchanges are also very funny. ...and I like that the guardian angel looks really gay. XD
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the composition was quite tricky as I didn't want the angel to be moving around much. thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it.
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Yano Mr E makes a valid point. They must have the most astounding hair products in heaven to keep their hair looking like Action Man as they float and shimmy about. And yet they don't aply the same stuff to their wings, as we can see a couple of feathers flying off in the first panel and yet not a hair out of place!
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yes but if you look very closely...the wings are pink-ish. GAY!! hehe, he uses product on his wings, that's an ego of heavenly proportions.
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Doesn't stop him losing the occational feather ;D I'd get my money back for that wing product
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Hoho, great stuff~
Long for the next one. Tomorrow? ovo
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last one, until the next batch is indeed going to be tomorrow. thanks for liking!
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me too, hope that I get it published so that I can draw it all.
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pfff, if one's going strictly off of looks, there'd totally be even chances on which one might be gay.
I can very much see that Mr. E would prefer snarking at a stuffy-proper fellow like David, than actually doing his job. There's many words that would describe Mr. E, but "dedicated" isn't one of them!
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ha ha, I don't even think either of them are aware of sexuality..well, not in the PRACTICING sense anyways. thanks hun!
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he'll fucking make you believe it.
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This is a very nice piece of work that has once again show that your skills are growing well and that your knowledge and understanding of the comicbook universe is growing a great deal more than in previous years. While this page is more about description with segments of humour thrown the focus being more on body language of the two questioning one another along with the level of tease added work well and it does show to us that you can create good direction of dialect between two. It's been approached well and though not too heavily reflected on humour as past pages or comics created it still shows strengths in other fields as mentioned. What's also nice is the multitude of scenes and perspective angles that we see them both from which has greatly worked in adding energy. It certainly shows that you created more in the atmosphere even as we see this in one location from multiple angles which creates more in enjoyment of reading.
Keep it up.
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thanks hun. Something that I try to push all the time -even if I'm not yet skilled enough to handle it- is angles. I know that eventually I'll be able to draw them and they give such a sense of drama if you handle it correctly.
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Your very welcome as always and glad it helped you.
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lol I just love your comics Simply love them they are absolutely the best on da.
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ha! you should look around more, but thanks.
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Lol I have but your stuff still makes me smile the most
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This has got me thinking...
If a guardian angel can stop a muse from trying to harm its maker, can the angel stop the muse from inspiring a particularly nasty or "sinful" piece?
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you give me food for thought....yes, you really do, even though I've written the whole thing and this is the only time that Mr E's relationship with the guardian angel appears, it doesn't mean to say that that kind of thing isn't happening with other angel/muse banter.
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