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xDizzyBx [2015-02-16 18:52:12 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is the first critique I ever write, so pardon me if is a poor critique.
Composition: Following the rule of thirds, also the golden ratio, I can say is really well done, if I'm not mistaken, you wanted the viewer to watch the whole scene and then focus itself on the argoninan's face, which corses an interesction point of the rule of thirds almost exactly.
Mood and lightning: A gloomy dark mood, you can feel the battle at night and the violence, the colors are very well mixed with the lightning creating the perfect mood for the scene, and all the values of them respect themselves, I really like the monochromatic feeling with the colors to accent the scene.
Technique: The drawing and shapes are well done, you can easily understand what is happening, and the speed painting base style is clearly seen, a little retouched to make the painting cleaner and with more detail, in good balance with the overall mood. Perhaps a little more detail on the characters could be an area of improvement aswell
And to end the criquite, I can say, the only thing I could point out as an aerea of improvement, could be the perspective. There is nothing wrong with this one, but as it a fightning scene, it could look more "dramatic". I really like the change of perspective with the gargoyle and the jumping guy as they are in a higher plane. To me, perspective is the hardest thing to master above all esle.
Awesome and impressive work overall.
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Entar0178 In reply to xDizzyBx [2015-02-16 20:11:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique, i'm glad you saw the rule of thirds working in this picture, it shows your deep knowledge in composition laws. I'm really honored that you like my work
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Wrathers [2015-07-22 19:07:25 +0000 UTC]
That's it, I'm Making a guerilla argonian fighter. Really nice work looks epic
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Entar0178 In reply to Wrathers [2015-07-22 19:26:45 +0000 UTC]
Β Thank you! Glad that this picture inspires you!
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DynharyilArgonian [2015-02-18 13:49:13 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations! Bethesda posted this on Facebook!
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Entar0178 In reply to xDizzyBx [2015-02-16 20:05:40 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe this! Thank you for sharing, this is amazing to be featured there!
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JessBethesda [2015-02-16 17:29:18 +0000 UTC]
Incredible work!
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SoulRebel9 [2015-02-14 04:42:35 +0000 UTC]
awesome!
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Entar0178 In reply to SoulRebel9 [2015-02-16 20:07:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks man, you have great stuff in your gallery!
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SoulRebel9 In reply to Entar0178 [2015-02-17 18:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And your welcome : )
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JulianneAngels [2015-02-13 05:51:52 +0000 UTC]
Superb work! Love it!!!Β
Please feel free to join my Elder Scrolls group as well:Β www.facebook.com/groups/TES.Seβ¦Β
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Entar0178 In reply to JulianneAngels [2015-02-13 06:12:06 +0000 UTC]
Will do, thank you for invitation!
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tazdarkstripe13 [2015-02-12 12:54:24 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap, you make Geel-Ei look more badass than the Argonian who roars in the cinematic trailer!
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Entar0178 In reply to tazdarkstripe13 [2015-02-12 13:47:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And in fact, he is more badassΒ
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