Comments: 62
Tala-Twilight [2009-01-04 22:17:41 +0000 UTC]
I don't think it's awful or anything. :3 You characters look like they belong together and otherwise fit into their background. Something that may help is the show the shadow of Tulio casting on Pavia, since they are so close and it seems your light is coming from the upper left. Tulio's eyes are forward facing and level like a pretador's. I know Spirit/Dreamwork style horses have larger, slightly forward facing eyes, but they are still set on at a slight angle to make them more horse-like. It could also help to have stronger shadows on the ground, and Tulio's shadow also reflecting on Pavia's legs like in the reference.
Like I said, I think it's nice and if you feel you are going backwards, it's honestly just the low before you make an artsy breakthrough. :3
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midnight-mare [2008-12-31 22:45:23 +0000 UTC]
beautiful job
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broomstick88 [2008-12-31 15:11:01 +0000 UTC]
it's sweet. a nice tender moment
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sunsetluvr247 [2008-12-30 02:14:18 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous, as usual! It is not an awful drawing! I love it!
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Larka-Wolf [2008-12-29 22:37:49 +0000 UTC]
I really love the little flowers! And the poses are great! You are doing great!
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chinaflower [2008-12-29 20:54:16 +0000 UTC]
Wow. Amazing coloring. I love your style and the background is fantastic. Don't hit yourself too much about the drawings. Looks perfectly fine.
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Quill-Feathers In reply to karzi01 [2008-12-30 01:41:55 +0000 UTC]
omg Karzi this is so funny but guess what? thats me as well!!! My friend from high school made that for me when we were freshman way way way back when I thought Deviantart sucked ( I KNOW ITS BLASPHAME!!!). Thats my crappy comic. Back when I sucked at drawing people.
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Quill-Feathers In reply to karzi01 [2008-12-30 01:46:28 +0000 UTC]
noes it is cruddy!!!!! *covers face*
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ItalySky [2008-12-29 19:53:49 +0000 UTC]
you did a wonderful job especially pavia she looks very pretty!
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broomstick88 [2008-12-29 17:29:05 +0000 UTC]
i like the pretty black and white ones face. they are both very pretty. i have the worst time with horse bodies. yours always look so nice
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nikquine [2008-12-29 17:21:18 +0000 UTC]
*whack!*
Dana, don't you dare say they're bad!
They couldn't look better! I love the flower in Tulio's mouth! The pose is wonderful and this is amazing!
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