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Erikari β€” Abbie

Published: 2009-08-04 16:48:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 673; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 22
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Description This is my very first try with SAI, I like this painty effect!
Though I had some problems in finding tools at first
I still don't know if there is a geometric lazo or a text tool...

SO. This is Abbie, my character. For a serie that I might develop after ending Slip Love.

I like SAI I must say...

The original is quite big, lol

EDIT:
that's her evolution
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Comments: 27

alpacamuart [2009-08-04 17:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


I really liked this piece, it caught my eye.
First off the colors are very vibrant, and work together very well. I like how it's so simple yet it still is very bold.

The hair was nice, but it seemed un-realistic to me, the way it sticks out, but that might just be your own style.

And though you didn't make a background, it would have been neat to see some sort of school themed background.

But the lines are very clean, the shading and coloring are so nice, nothing to flashy, but not too simple.

I think this is a really pretty picture, and I think for your first time in SAI, you did amazing.

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Erikari In reply to alpacamuart [2009-08-04 17:40:36 +0000 UTC]

thank u!
not only you were the first writing me a critique, but also a quite good one, the points you outlined are true xD expecially my weak ones!
thank u also for the time you spent on wtiting!

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alpacamuart In reply to Erikari [2009-08-04 18:04:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I find that many artsits have no one to tell that what needs improvments and what doesn't.
As do I, but hey, I'll help others while I can. -.-


I'm glad that you found it fair enough, and I hope it helped you.

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Erikari In reply to alpacamuart [2009-08-04 18:15:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm about to uplad a fixed version! no School bg, but I changed some little things. lol. yup!
that's true, whne I critique or comment I try to help artist too xD

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alpacamuart In reply to Erikari [2009-08-04 18:23:01 +0000 UTC]

>w<
Ah really?
I'll check it out, I'm sure it'll be better!



That's good, help the other artists!

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HannaMaja [2010-01-05 14:11:08 +0000 UTC]

The colouring is great! Keep up the good work

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Erikari In reply to HannaMaja [2010-01-05 14:36:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the support :3

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girlyfun [2009-08-22 11:54:58 +0000 UTC]

oh, i love her! so sweet!

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sofia-1989 [2009-08-09 15:14:57 +0000 UTC]

8D bellissima ragazza di capelli azzuri bella...
ciao

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Erikari In reply to sofia-1989 [2009-09-03 16:44:02 +0000 UTC]

haha, felice che ti piaccia

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sofia-1989 In reply to Erikari [2009-09-03 18:52:07 +0000 UTC]

amo ^3^

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supremeX2 [2009-08-05 04:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work, really beautiful!

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MCMXC2 [2009-08-04 20:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Splendida!

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Tsun3 [2009-08-04 19:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Hm.Nice and clean.
Though there could've been more happy colors
just to give it a go xD

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Ernestgirl [2009-08-04 19:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Che puccia XD

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dalliupper66 [2009-08-04 19:23:33 +0000 UTC]

I love it!!! she came out very cute!!

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keichi-kun89 [2009-08-04 19:20:33 +0000 UTC]

come prima volta con Sai Γ¨ forte XD,il lineart l'hai fatto anche con SAI ?

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Erikari In reply to keichi-kun89 [2009-08-04 23:09:21 +0000 UTC]

sì, sempre con SAI, è perfino più facile che usare i vettori in photoshop, sono molto soddisfatta!

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keichi-kun89 In reply to Erikari [2009-08-05 08:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Γ¨ vero XD,Sai per la colorazione e il disegno diretto Γ¨ fenomenale se ben usato

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Erikari In reply to keichi-kun89 [2009-09-03 16:48:12 +0000 UTC]

concordo

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HG-nerdgirl [2009-08-04 18:04:09 +0000 UTC]

cute hair!

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circle-granatapfel [2009-08-04 17:31:08 +0000 UTC]

SAI has no text tools ;3

The eyes of her looks like you have it draw it...like your other style like "bus stop" more q_q

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Erikari In reply to circle-granatapfel [2009-08-04 17:43:33 +0000 UTC]

xD aaah sorry but I don't understand the second part of your comment!

pity for the text tool photoshop gots it
*loves her photoshop *

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circle-granatapfel In reply to Erikari [2009-08-04 18:06:48 +0000 UTC]

The girl don't looks like if you have it draw it^^

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Erikari In reply to circle-granatapfel [2009-08-04 23:10:09 +0000 UTC]

hmm... explain "have it draw it" in other words

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circle-granatapfel In reply to Erikari [2009-08-05 09:10:14 +0000 UTC]

You have your own anima style and this girl looks like this style xDDDD

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Erikari In reply to circle-granatapfel [2009-08-05 21:38:03 +0000 UTC]

ah!that's good then!

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