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ErsbethShadowsong — The Spectre and Archangel 68

Published: 2012-01-20 21:57:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 43200; Favourites: 498; Downloads: 231
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Description I know we don't see this side of Shepard in the game, so this is my attempt to show that even the Great Commander Shepard has her breaking point. And of course, Garrus is there for her.
Inspired by Jack's romance scene and many many many pictures of Victoria Frances. Google her if you want to take a look at her pictures.

Thanks to for his beta-read!

Chapter 8 - Alchera
Page 67: [link]
Page 68: Viewing
Page 69: [link]


Previous chapters:
Chapter 1 - Trapped
Page 1: [link]
Chapter 2 - Just Like Old Times
Page 12: [link]
Chapter 3 - Take Care of Him
Page 22: [link]
Chapter 4 – Dreams
Page 30: [link]
Chapter 5 – Blowing off Steam
Page 40: [link]
Chapter 6 – The Calm Before the Storm
Page 49: [link]
Chapter 7 – Horizon
Page 53: [link]


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Comments: 505

Kesna [2021-05-30 23:19:03 +0000 UTC]

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4evergarrus [2019-01-21 05:04:17 +0000 UTC]

i love this so much well done

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LunaNightstar [2018-04-17 23:59:36 +0000 UTC]

This makes me tear up so much! Good job! 😢 😢😢

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Omega-Knight01 [2017-03-26 18:40:44 +0000 UTC]

Such a sad and touchy moment with Garrus, glad he was there for her. He is the best.

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SpectreFanchin10 [2017-03-01 01:19:36 +0000 UTC]

It's been a few years since I read this. So many feelings.

why couldn't they add that part of the game?

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MasterArt40000 [2016-10-23 18:41:28 +0000 UTC]

Always thought that was a problem in most games.  The main character does have heart to heart moments or breaks down.  How can they not with the weight of the world/galaxy on their shoulders?

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Didd23 [2015-06-05 03:20:25 +0000 UTC]

it's been almost a year since i last read this, and I've gotta say; THE FEELS! THE FEELS!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Didd23 [2015-06-28 09:44:19 +0000 UTC]

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tiffy316 [2015-01-25 13:58:06 +0000 UTC]

   

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to tiffy316 [2015-01-25 18:04:02 +0000 UTC]

*hands a tissue*

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Exilon58 [2014-07-12 18:50:33 +0000 UTC]

SO....MUCH....FEEL!!!!!

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indv11 In reply to Exilon58 [2014-11-20 00:14:19 +0000 UTC]

I am actually tearing up here.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Exilon58 [2014-07-13 18:09:01 +0000 UTC]

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Kommandant4298 [2014-05-20 14:53:02 +0000 UTC]

That last cell.............. so damn tempting for me to recreate it in Gmod........... With your permission of course.

I have to say, I have seen what you have done and I'm very impressed. There are some areas that don't sit with me, but that's mainly because I usually play as a Paragon Shepard, not Renegade so.... yeah.

Other than that, keep up the good work!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Kommandant4298 [2014-05-20 18:46:17 +0000 UTC]

Gmod? I'm afraid I'm not familiar with that one...

Thanks! Well, believe me... When I tried to play as Parangon, there were some areas that didn't sit well with me either, so I understand you perfectly.

I'll do my best!

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Kommandant4298 In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2014-05-20 23:14:21 +0000 UTC]

A.K.A: Garry's Mod. Gmod for short.

It's a sandbox game which started out as a mod for Half-Life 2, but then became a stand alone version. It allows you to muck around with the Source Physics engine that VALVe have made with Counter-Strike, HL2, Team Fortress 2, etc. Essentially they give you the tools, and your left to your own devices.

Many people, myself included, have created ported custom content from various other games to Gmod which includes the ME Trilogy. Here's an example of what I've done with Gmod: kommandant4298.deviantart.com/…

Hope you like it!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Kommandant4298 [2014-05-23 19:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Aahhh. I see, those are pretty cool! You have my permission if you what to do any version of that panel. Just send me a link to see it and I can include it in the comments of the next page. If you want, of course!!

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Kommandant4298 In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2014-05-23 23:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Will Do! And Thanks.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Kommandant4298 [2014-06-02 19:54:07 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Thank you for your interest!

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Ryan-the-fox [2013-07-11 04:35:11 +0000 UTC]

Aw that make me sad to see her cry ;^;
and love your comic :3

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Ryan-the-fox [2013-07-11 12:14:44 +0000 UTC]

Ouch! I didn't mean that! Sorry!!

Thanks

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Ryan-the-fox In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2013-07-12 04:28:42 +0000 UTC]

it's ok I love your story so far :3 keep up good work ^w^

and your welcome!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Ryan-the-fox [2013-07-15 12:49:52 +0000 UTC]

I'll do my best!

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nexus763 [2013-06-20 19:36:09 +0000 UTC]

If only Liara saw this at this time... she would be devastated.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to nexus763 [2013-06-24 10:18:08 +0000 UTC]

... and eager to hug Shepard...

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casadrat06 [2013-06-20 14:14:14 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. 3: <3

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to casadrat06 [2013-06-20 18:18:10 +0000 UTC]

It was a sad moment ... I'm glad you d'aww-ed here ^^

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SciFiotica [2013-05-20 22:28:05 +0000 UTC]

so good. I'm loving this second read through...

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to SciFiotica [2013-05-23 05:41:19 +0000 UTC]

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Exilon58 [2013-04-01 19:47:51 +0000 UTC]

I really wish the romance options was this dramatic. It would make Shepard more human

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Exilon58 [2013-04-02 17:52:22 +0000 UTC]

I must agree with your statement.

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AuthorOfSins [2013-03-09 06:07:30 +0000 UTC]

Ohgawd... I saw a random link to this from the 'more like this' thingy... and now I've been sucked into this comic. YET AGAIN. I can't stay away.
SO MANY FEEEEELZZZZZZ!!

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to AuthorOfSins [2013-03-26 09:26:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for such a praise!!!!

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AuthorOfSins In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2013-03-26 14:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Very welcome hun

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to AuthorOfSins [2013-03-27 19:58:01 +0000 UTC]

;D

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caryara [2013-03-01 17:27:28 +0000 UTC]

so touching ..beautiful, thank you

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to caryara [2013-03-26 09:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for all your lovely comments!!

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AuthorOfSins [2012-09-21 05:29:33 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG so touching.

~love~

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to AuthorOfSins [2012-09-24 09:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I hope it wasn't too cheesy

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AuthorOfSins In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2012-09-24 09:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Not cheesy at all, another very very powerful scene. Definitely a tear-jerker, and a warm fuzzy when he holds her. Very touching.

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to AuthorOfSins [2012-10-02 21:47:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Sometimes I have the feeling that I'm driving the characters too OOC and making them too soft... I'm glad to see I'm mistaken

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AuthorOfSins In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2012-10-03 05:15:52 +0000 UTC]

No not at all OOC, it was perfect!

~love~

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SomeKindaSpy In reply to AuthorOfSins [2012-09-21 06:24:46 +0000 UTC]

I know~! I squee'd when they hugged...

Fuck the stereotype of straight guys having to be overly manly and unemotional.

I. SHIP. IT.

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AuthorOfSins In reply to SomeKindaSpy [2012-09-21 06:30:58 +0000 UTC]

HELL yes. This.^

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SomeKindaSpy In reply to AuthorOfSins [2012-09-21 06:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Aye.

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AuthorOfSins In reply to SomeKindaSpy [2012-09-21 06:34:08 +0000 UTC]

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Kuyo-chan [2012-09-05 12:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Awww.. i download this dlc pack few days ago with Normandy too
I read Presleys Report and start to cry
ME2 is so awesome game <3
Woah.. i never cry so often then on ME2 Q,Q

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ErsbethShadowsong In reply to Kuyo-chan [2012-09-14 20:41:14 +0000 UTC]

It was a sad mission...
The report was moving... it showed how a xenophobe could change his mind with the adequate environment (Ash, take note of this!).
I did cry playing Me3... so much!!

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Kuyo-chan In reply to ErsbethShadowsong [2012-09-16 23:45:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh does it mean... there are many sad moments on me3 too? Q__Q
Ooh noo Q,Q
Aaah,.. i want play too XD
*still love your fan comic*
Go.. go.. goo~ <3

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Marie-Scalereader [2012-08-01 22:10:18 +0000 UTC]

"How come Cerberus revived me and not them?" Shepard screamed bashing her fist against the side of the shuttle making it veer off course. "What makes me so important that people have to die for me?" She screamed once again her eyeliner making lines down her cheeks.

"You're humanity's gateway to the galaxy." The illusive man said coming on the transmitter.

"So I'm just a political toy?"

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