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Eve-Of-Halloween — failed at making a Marysue
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Published: 2015-06-12 10:58:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 631; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 1
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My character creation skills are a motherfucking curse!!!!!!!!!I tried to make a marysue character, something to show people an example of what not to do.
BUT GOD FUCKING DAMNIT MY MIND WOULDNT LET ME!
so now I have a new oc........still need to fully decide what to do with her, if I will try to make her a marysue, or just make her one of oc candypop's flunkies.
still WHY BODY WHY!!!!!!?????!!!!!
Name: Ebony Mary Wilson.
CP name: Spray Paint (named this because of her skin pattern caused by chemical burns bleaching blots)
race: Hispanic, African American.
Class: Human
type: Knife wielder.
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Comments: 13
She's still kind of a Mary sue in the Creepypasta fandom. Most girl Creepypasta oc's have weird coloured hair/ emo hair, dark, bad pasts (Which you don't need) and you might have not given her some. Is she incorporated into Slender mansion? Another big thing.
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Mary sues are more then looks
remember a sue is a perfect character. This is more of just edgy or scene like in appearence. Trust me I own a female pasta with a bad background and she is not a sue, as some characters can have a bad back story if it makes sense. And none of my characters are part of slender as he is not a creepypasta.
stereotypes and over using trops =/= a mary sue.
which is a shame people automatically see unoriginality or stereotypes or cliches as sue traits as they are not always so.
cliches are cliches for a reason.
And while this character looks sceney not emo as that is a different look. if anything she is more towards a branch of gothic in looks. but its more scene. and tbh i like her design and im not using her as a cp. im actually using her as some edgy teen for a animation im working on XD
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K, never mind my question in the note. XD I didn't see this get posted.
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I've seen plenty, so make sure she's sexy. Like everybody has a huge crush on her! Don't forget the carved smile, and add the killer after her name. She has to change her hair and eye color. Also give her a tragic past that has to deal with being bullied at school that lead her to kill them and her family! Make sure everything about her is super neon bright colors! Don't forget the SUPER LONG ASS HAIR! She also has to win every single fight she gets it! Oh yea, you know how we talk about everybody wanting her and is sexy? Well she has to look sexy, this includes the character wearing skirts and stocking with a crop top! Uses a knife? Check! You MUST make her a neko! She also has to be in love with canon pastas and they have to be in love with her back! Don't forget that her eyes glow in the dark! She has to be perfect and everybody has to love her.
Now make that Mary Sue!
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Well they say they aren't suppose to have bright colors and it's true, but Clio came from the circus! Circus freak have bright colors!
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I don't know why I like her XD
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You put a huge amount of effort into her, that's probably why.
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I actually didn't.
I literally just threw colors on her. I guess I just like the personality her look gives off
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Ah. That would explain it.
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