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Description Please comment!! I love getting comments, so please comment with what you think much lovagge forever!!

This took a really long time to make and colour, but it was so worth it ^^ I really like this picture ^^ Roy's wearing what is probably the most convincing white shirt I've ever coloured!!




So here we go, let Roy and Riza explain this office mishap, and hopefully you won't give them a court-martial for it!

She eyed the plant hanging from the ceiling with suspicion.
"What's this?" Her tone warned the man in the office that she wasn't impressed.
"It's called mistletoe. Have you never encountered it before, Lieutenant?" He smirked at her from across his desk, the smug face resting on his clasped hands.
She sighed, rolling her eyes. "Of course, Sir. What I meant to say was: what is it doing above my desk?"
The smirk grew, and the dark eyes glinted as though they were set with real onyx. Her stomach suddenly felt filled with helium, lifting it up until her lungs were too tight for her to breathe. Fortunately, her poker face was perfect. She just hoped that he didn't notice how her chest heaved slightly with the deeper, quicker breaths she had to take.

"Thought I'd conduct a little..." He pushed his chair out, standing much taller than her. "Scientific experiment." He knew that the longer he kept her wondering, the better her reaction would be. The anticipation grew in him, tingling all over his body. It wasn't often that the man with the womaniser's reputation grew nervous around women. This one, however, was different.

She watched him with a raised eyebrow as he crossed the room towards her: his every footstep pounding with her heartbeat. She'd never had to work so hard to keep her face from showing emotion.

"See, it's natural for a scientist like me to be so curious." He wondered where this little speech was coming from. It wasn't as though he'd rehearsed it at all. He knew what he'd wanted to say at first, but when faced with his Lieutenant - his beautiful, golden-haired Riza - it sounded stupid. Absolute pathetic drivel. When he realised this, he felt like a young schoolboy trying to talk to his first crush.

"So I'd want to know things, like-" he stopped directly in front of her, almost toe to toe. Any other person would have been intimidated by the Flame Alchemist. Not Riza Hawkeye. She stood her ground, looking up into his face confidently.
His voice dropped to a whisper. "What is it that makes your breathing suddenly get faster like that?" His hand traced up her arm slowly, then down again. She tried to repress a shiver as his fingertips raised goosebumps across her skin.
"Sir, that-"
"And why do you suddenly get defensive?" He interrupted her protest, bringing his hand further up and over her shoulder, his fingers cupping around the back of her neck. His thumb rubbed a gentle back-and-forth over a spot just behind her ear, making her gasp aloud. A harsh red blush ran up her neck and into her cheeks, making her face boil.

He chuckled, pleased that he had brought on such a response. The alchemist in him - the scientist - knew the biology behind such a reaction. The romantic in him liked the reasoning behind it: the excitement it caused in the woman when he touched her. That thought brought out the pervert in him, who wanted to touch her more. He shook that thought from his mind. Those kinds of thoughts weren't appropriate right now. Well... They weren't 100% appropriate, anyway...

He leaned down so that his lips were just a hair's breadth from her ear. "And what happens when I do this?" His lips grazed the spot where his thumb had previously been, and upon feeling the slight tremor that ripped through her, he nipped gently at her. Her breathing suddenly spiked and became audible, the shiver turned into a continuous trembling.
"S-sir?" Her voice was quiet, but it was the most that she could manage. She noticed the smile that graced her Colonel's features as he heard her stutter for the first time in her many years serving in the military.

Before she could make a protest, or even a reply, his lips crushed against hers feverishly, enticing a tiny moan from somewhere within her. He suddenly felt his shirt tighten over his back, and it took him a moment's distraction before he realised that his Lieutenant was grasping his clothing inside her fists.

Riza chuckled as onto her lips Roy murmured "Happy Christmas."



Have a wonderful Christmas, everybody.





Well, just a little note here, too:
It's been pointed out to me that someone recognised one of the pictures I used for reference that I found on google (which proves that I'm just bad with that sort of thing... >.<) and the picture was actually from this site o_O So I'm giving credit here to the artist of the main reference for the poses: *nami86 And I do apologise for the crappy use of it!! Very much so!! >.<
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Comments: 44

LeChaoss [2014-12-27 20:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Ouiii Ouioui! Love the way it turned out! Really good kissing scene!

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IshidaYuki [2013-03-04 19:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow, it's so beautiful *-*

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DarkPony967 [2012-11-30 21:52:42 +0000 UTC]

so cute ^-^

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Pyromaniac97 [2011-11-13 07:29:26 +0000 UTC]

prettiful

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Vampyyrisusi [2011-08-19 08:37:16 +0000 UTC]

Well ya hear me, you naughty brat, I have some words to say - that cuteness is criminal. Sir!

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Eve-Francesca [2011-04-28 05:54:08 +0000 UTC]

This is really pretty. I love the coloring in it. The fic in the artist's comments was a cute read, too. Good job!

I did notice something about this piece, though. Roy and Riza's pose looks very familiar. It reminded me a lot of this Harry/Ginny fanart by *nami86 : [link] I don't know if you used that piece as a reference for this particular Roy/Riza drawing, but if you did, it would probably be a good idea to provide *nami86 with the proper credit in your artist's comments. There's a chance that this could all be a mistake on my part, but if it isn't, I just thought I'd make that suggestion. I'm not trying to be rude or anything, I promise!

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EveMonsta In reply to Eve-Francesca [2011-06-18 20:52:02 +0000 UTC]

o_O Oh wow I didn't even know this was on dA! O_O I was using a few different reference pictures from google :S I guess I'll put that in the comments Thanks for pointing it out!

...Weird thing is, I've actually seen that piece on here before and I only just realised when I saw it o_O ...I guess I need a better attention span

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Eve-Francesca In reply to EveMonsta [2011-06-19 04:30:01 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Oh, it's okay. We all have moments where we become absentminded or forgetful. I have them all the time.

LOL. It's totally fine. Especially since you've given the artist credit now.

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BlackWaterMoon [2011-02-04 20:35:17 +0000 UTC]

I love it! The story and the pic

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EveMonsta In reply to BlackWaterMoon [2011-02-04 21:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much

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BlackWaterMoon In reply to EveMonsta [2011-02-05 09:30:40 +0000 UTC]

Welcome ^.^

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flabaflaba123 [2010-12-28 04:49:54 +0000 UTC]

When Roy & Riza & a mistletoe mix it makes me think that they would probably milk that situation for everything it's got. They both end up under a mistletoe, & somebody points it out & then they'd immediately engage in a 'Clash of the Tongues'.

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EveMonsta In reply to flabaflaba123 [2010-12-28 09:19:15 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I know what you mean

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Khielle1982 [2010-12-27 10:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Love it!!!!!!!!

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EveMonsta In reply to Khielle1982 [2010-12-27 12:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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ElisitaGayle [2010-12-26 17:59:30 +0000 UTC]

There's something very off about the top of Roy's head. I think the angle and shape aren't right.

That being said, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece! A little bit for the hopeless romantic in all of us, wishing for the right man to pull us under the mistletoe!

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EveMonsta In reply to ElisitaGayle [2010-12-26 18:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah I was hoping people wouldn't notice that >.< I'm trying to fix it at the moment, but I'm just not very good with heads Thanks for the criticism, though, now I know it's that noticeable

Thank you very much!! ^^

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ElisitaGayle In reply to EveMonsta [2010-12-26 18:08:51 +0000 UTC]

You welcome. kisses are hard to draw to just work on it for next time, and don't freak out over it! LOL

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EveMonsta In reply to ElisitaGayle [2010-12-26 18:12:29 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah, I know, it's really difficult This is one of the first kisses I've drawn, if not the first :S I can point out loads of little bits that aren't right with the anatomy, but I guess I can work on it ^^ Thanks very much

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Fullmetalmage [2010-12-26 13:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Now this is just fantastic. I love the pairing/pic, and this scenario is perfectly feasible. Great work!

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EveMonsta In reply to Fullmetalmage [2010-12-26 14:01:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much

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Fullmetalmage In reply to EveMonsta [2010-12-27 20:29:29 +0000 UTC]

No problem! ^^

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AnimaFlammae [2010-12-25 20:35:48 +0000 UTC]

Simply awesome! *.* Beautiful pic, with a very lovely backstory.

Merry Christmas!

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EveMonsta In reply to AnimaFlammae [2010-12-25 21:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Merry Christmas to you, too

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AnimaFlammae In reply to EveMonsta [2010-12-25 21:58:46 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ^^

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ArtDagger [2010-12-25 18:29:11 +0000 UTC]

I love these two. Nice drawing and really love what you've written along with it.

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EveMonsta In reply to ArtDagger [2010-12-25 18:48:25 +0000 UTC]

I know, I love these guys aswell Thank you very much, and thanks for the fave

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DRAX-IS-MY-NAME [2010-12-25 02:50:39 +0000 UTC]

I love this. So much. You don't even know how much I love it. Words cannot describe. The story.... is so romantic and amazing. You are a genius!

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EveMonsta In reply to DRAX-IS-MY-NAME [2010-12-25 09:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!! I really appreciate it ^^ I'm sure I'm not a genius, but thank you very much for the compliment Have a great Christmas ^^

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DRAX-IS-MY-NAME In reply to EveMonsta [2010-12-26 01:37:33 +0000 UTC]

LOL you too!!!

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tviki [2010-12-24 23:30:52 +0000 UTC]

yaay! I love it! Merry christmas to you!

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EveMonsta In reply to tviki [2010-12-24 23:51:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!!!! And a merry Christmas to you, too!!

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tviki In reply to EveMonsta [2010-12-25 11:21:07 +0000 UTC]

yw

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SMBZrocks [2010-12-24 21:14:54 +0000 UTC]

Nice work!
You have a merry christmas too!

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EveMonsta In reply to SMBZrocks [2010-12-24 21:27:16 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you I think I will, and you should too ^^

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Liraen [2010-12-24 20:51:01 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful drawing and a backstory to match ^^

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EveMonsta In reply to Liraen [2010-12-24 20:51:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ^^

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Liraen In reply to EveMonsta [2010-12-24 21:17:58 +0000 UTC]

No prob! :3

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Cybastien [2010-12-24 20:30:09 +0000 UTC]

lol Kinky?!

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EveMonsta In reply to Cybastien [2010-12-24 20:31:22 +0000 UTC]

It's not that bad, he only had one or two perverted thoughts!! Read the description damnit!!

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Cybastien In reply to EveMonsta [2010-12-26 22:20:27 +0000 UTC]

lol

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EveMonsta In reply to Cybastien [2010-12-27 03:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Did you read it?

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Cybastien In reply to EveMonsta [2010-12-27 14:10:01 +0000 UTC]

nooo not yet

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EveMonsta In reply to Cybastien [2010-12-27 14:35:17 +0000 UTC]

gees, it#s not that long, just read it

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