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EvilKingGumby — Practice: Aiden's Dream [NSFW]

Published: 2010-06-08 01:47:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Echoing through his dreams was the same question.

      "If you were given the choice to know the moment of your death, would you want the answer?"

      Aiden awoke in a sweat.It was the same dream he had been given since early childhood. Since he was a mere 5 years old an still fascinated by shiny glass, days at the beach and butterfly wings. Amidst his childhood innocence were darkened nights of himself crawling across a large darkened house with his legs numb and pained and wet with blood. Of a large man with ashy skin and a lazy eye stumbling down stairs after him. The windows would light up with blue and red police flickers and commotion would always clatter the normally silent front yard.

      He sat on the side of the bed and ran his hands across his legs, feeling the stubble starting to become noticeable again. Is this guy one of my tricks? Is it a befouled lover who finds out their betrothed preferred me to their grotesque visage? The snorting heap of a man on the other side of the bed punctuated his question firmly. Probably. With that Aiden stood and walked naked onto the black wrought iron balcony.

      Outside was unseasonably warm for the Bahamas, especially at night. Overlooking the downtown, he saw the glint of the ocean far at the horizon, almost submerged in the buildings and spires of the sprawling metropolis. The wind was a ghostly wrap of cool moist sea air, the streets still echoing faint music from the last few nightclubs getting ready to turn in, and the occasional sputter of a car passing through or a motorbike rocketing by. The night sky was fair, glowing around a half moon silver and still, most of the stars obscured by the sallow cloud-line that was always sign of torrential rains to come in the morning sunrise. He shivered off a long gust of cold wind and walked back inside to see the snoring mound still deep in post orgasm slumber.

      In the kitchen a fresh pot of coffee hissed off the last few spurts of heat, warming his hands as he prepped a mug for himself and reached for a second, only to stop and place that mug vacantly at he dusty end of the table. No need to make that second mug, stupid, the dead don't need coffee. Which was worse, living every day wishing to be with the dead, or knowing when they were going to finally die, and unable to change that fact no matter how hard one tried? He added half and half and two spoonfuls of sugar and sat on his couch cupping the warm mug. A bird perched on the railing of the balcony and shrieked, startling the long deep snoring behind him into a stumbling shadow that moved to the bathroom.

      "Is that fresh coffee I smell, Aye?"

      "Yessa, it certainly is Mr. Big. It certainly is."

      Pompous ass…

      "Cream, no sugar, son. One Ice cube and a pinch of pepper. " The toilet seat banged down and the bathroom door quickly slammed shut. A muffled "And one of the jelly donuts too!"

      Aiden shook his head and stifled a sarcastic laugh. It was like it always was. All about Mr. Big. All about his needs. But, Aiden reminded himself, He is the client. We live to serve.

      He quickly prepped coffee as requested and plucked the last donut, freshly powdered, placed it onto a dark blue porcelain place, next to his coffee, on the counter. Heavy footsteps shifted and a meaty, aromatic hand settled on Aiden's shoulder.

      "Thanks, son, You're a doll."

      Mr Big settled down with his coffee and donut across from Aiden, unsettling the months of dust on the table and trailing bathroom perfume behind him, seething the entire kitchen with a funky coffee-sewage soupiness. There was a repugnant snorting as Mr. Big breathed through his nose, gobbling down the donut in chunk-ripped pieces,  covering his fingers and chins in sugar and dark purple jelly. He disgusted Aiden, in the light of the kitchen amongst the flower designs and fine dishware, the glass vases and heavy wooden spice racks and dried potpourri shelved between sculptures and silver tea sets. Tis hulk of a man, hairy, sweaty, grunting, was a pig in paradise. And Aiden couldn't get the visage of that pig rutting and bucking and rubbing itself all up and down Aiden's soft supple teenage skin.

      The door clattered the silence, an eager knuckle rattling the pewter of the curio cabinet in the front hallways loudly, followed by restless silence and what sounded faintly like a shotgun cocking.
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Comments: 6

stevecook23 [2010-06-10 16:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Another interesting read Not sure if he'd immediately realise it's a shotgun being cocked, that's perhaps a little specific, but some lovely ideas coming up there! There are stories here, even if you don't use them

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EvilKingGumby In reply to stevecook23 [2010-06-10 17:16:13 +0000 UTC]

well, for americans at least, the sound of a pump action shotgun cocking is instinctivly recognised.. so much so if you heard it in a dark room you KNEW it was a shotgun and not a rifle or pistol or snapped twig. Likely our training on movies, tv and video games.. lol.. not to mention every red blooded american down south best know that sound else they'll get peppered walkin across the farm.. hehehe..

hmm.. I haven't revisited this short practice piece in a while.. you might be right, I'll have to re-read it and see if there's more there that I would want to use.

Thanks again! I am surprised you are taking your downtime to read my old crap practice stuff. It's really great you are doing it, but it has to be sort of painful too.

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stevecook23 In reply to EvilKingGumby [2010-06-10 22:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Hey, nothing you write is crap, don't worry I'm happy to spend some of my time reading your stuff, since you're spending so much of yours reading mine!

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EvilKingGumby In reply to stevecook23 [2010-06-10 23:55:41 +0000 UTC]

you're too kind. and probably too drunk. lol. but i'll thank you anyhow hehehe

lifde is gettin a bit hectic at the moment so it may take me a b it to hammer out more on your book, but i have not forgotten you!!

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stevecook23 In reply to EvilKingGumby [2010-06-11 02:23:58 +0000 UTC]

It might take me a while to hammer out the next chapter. Reports are due at school, and I've got a bottle of rum But don't think just because I've got it that I get drunk! In fact, I'm good at staying sober while I drink A fact that my bank account hates, but my liver loves

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EvilKingGumby In reply to stevecook23 [2010-06-11 03:54:32 +0000 UTC]

lol. I'll take your word for it. Just don't drink while your at work *laughs* might get yerself in a whole heap of trouble...

"Uh professor, why are you writing todays lesson on Ms. Breisinger's chest?"

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