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FairyKaz — The Fire Fairy
Published: 2005-06-19 20:32:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description The Fire Fairy makes her way
Out in the woods where she can play
Throwing sparks here and there
Sparks that matched her crimson hair
When all at once, a spark took flight
And flew out in the darkened night...
The trees, they tried to pull away
So could live to see another day
But ‘t’was no use, the spark aimed true
Was nothing else that they could do
The spark made smoke which led to fire
The flames devouring ever higher
The bark crackled, leaves ablaze
Surrounded by the smoky haze
It ate away from tree to tree
Searching, wanting to break free
Moving forward like a snake
Leaving ashes and destruction in its wake
Then all at once, the fire stood still
The wood was gone, it’d had its fill
The Fairy gasped at what she’d done
All she’d wanted was a bit of fun
But sometimes things don’t go as planned
It just depends where that sparks lands
If you play with fire, it’s fire you’ll get
And can you live with the regret?
So take heed now and hear this warning
The fairy did not wake next morning
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Comments: 14

LostRedemption [2005-12-24 00:19:27 +0000 UTC]

That's awsome! I love the ending!!!

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FairyKaz In reply to LostRedemption [2005-12-24 09:40:29 +0000 UTC]

thanks, that was just a fun little poem i started one day listening to a happy song then when the song changed so did the poem lol

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LostRedemption In reply to FairyKaz [2005-12-24 22:43:52 +0000 UTC]

lol... It's funny to see how music effects us. I love to listen to music.. I am pretty wierd on what I listen to. sometimes it's metal, sometimes it's soft rock...

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SOL-eliminator [2005-07-04 20:47:58 +0000 UTC]

I love it i cant belive i didnt make a comment b4 i it ages ago

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FairyKaz In reply to SOL-eliminator [2005-07-05 06:51:20 +0000 UTC]

yay! im glad, thank you very much

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RubyRanger [2005-06-25 13:12:23 +0000 UTC]

wow, i envy your rhyming skills. Excellent job. Definitely worthy of a fave.

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FairyKaz In reply to RubyRanger [2005-06-26 16:11:31 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you tobias! tis very sweet

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HolySpiritWithin [2005-06-20 19:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! I am not a huge rhyming fan but this worked and wnt so well. Great idea.

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FairyKaz In reply to HolySpiritWithin [2005-06-20 21:27:41 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you thats very sweet

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Citizen-Erased-7412 [2005-06-19 20:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Hoorah! Glad it's up. It's jolly awesome, well done!

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Tororo [2005-06-19 20:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Very good, love the way it rhymes. ^^

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FairyKaz In reply to Tororo [2005-06-19 20:48:23 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you!!

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spectatorofsuicide [2005-06-19 20:39:42 +0000 UTC]

I think it is very good,
any personal meaning or just in general?

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FairyKaz In reply to spectatorofsuicide [2005-06-19 20:49:55 +0000 UTC]

bit of both

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