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FallenFromInsanity — Priceless Treasures-Chapter 24
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I really need to establish a healthier sleeping schedule that does not include staying up til 3 am writing.
Chapter 24!So. 'Traumatized'. Speaks for itself, does it not? :3c
In case it doesn't, have some plot points!
-Callie and Raj have been knocked out and Ivy's missing in action, which leads Chatot to suspect that there's an intruder in the guild.
-I have this tiny head canon that Loudred is partially deaf in the games (hence all the yelling), but I wanted to give him some sort of advantage and made him hyper-sensitive to really soft/really far away sounds. (remember Fogbound Lake? just like then :3c)
-The intruder is revealed! And it turns out to be none other than.....IVY?!?!
-So yeah. She's sleepwalking. And attacking anyone that gets too close. OODLES OF FUN TIMES AHEAD 8D /shot
-Aden returns after getting kicked out lol and tries to talk some sense into her.
-That....doesn't exactly work out the way he hoped. :/
-After all the madness and hostility, the calm after the storm occurs in the form of a sweet, tender moment between our two heroes.
Will Ivy and Aden make a swift recovery? Or will the trauma be too much to bear anymore? Find out in the next chapter, 'Misled'!
Pokémon and all its characters belong to Nintendo.
Story is mine.
Have a wonderful day/afternoon/night/whatever.~
*EDIT P.S. you can now read Chapter 25 here: [link]
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Comments: 43
My favorite chapter.
my rating for this chapter:
17.558374583529627855829647928665926654862648476648553846758383 stars and holy crap this chapter is amazing it is better than john cena it is better than this it is better than the time i heard the phone say the wrong time and that it was zero degrees outside and that the humidity was zero percent and that the forecast was goodbye and i laughed so much it is comparable to my grandmas cooking omg the rating is such specific
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Holy crap, am I behind. But this nightmare intrigues me. Is it simply a side effect of her injury, or is there, perhaps, another...different...cause?
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KYAAAAAAAAA ADEN AND IVY FOREVER KYAAAAAA
AH GOSH IVY
ADEN IS HERE FOR YOU BABY GURL
HE WILL PROTECT YOU
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YES HE WILL
AAAAA I JUST LOVE MY BABIES SO MUCH
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Would you like your aforementioned radioactive pickles by mail or Fedex?
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I no longer trust the mail system. Things take far too long to be sent to me or get lost along the way. :3c
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We all know that Ivy and Aden like each other. the question is when will they admit it? Near the end? I can almost picture Aden getting frustrated if Ivy ever left.
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You'll find out soon enough.
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wow...just wow. And I tought she would get some permanent injury...this just blew my mind. I wonder if Ivy will do some more sleepwalking in the future. Heheheheheheheheh. >
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Hmm....depends. :3c
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I wonder if Ivy will tell Aden about her feelings
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Who knows? Maybe that will be revealed in the next chapter??
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Oh yeah by the way I started writing a story called PMD adventurers and the first chapter is up. Please read it and get anyone else to read it too
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Very nice chappie . Keep going. I'm new on deviantart by the way
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Thank you. And welcome to DA.
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OMG SO SWEET AND SO FREAKING SCARY. ...but I thought he was going to wake her up by kissing her, just to be honest. But then I was thinking-nah thats to unlike aden, so I was wondering. But it all made sense when he accidentally zapped her.
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Sweet and scary, just how I like it!
And yeah, that's a bit ooc for Aden.
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yaaa thats what i thought, but we can probably expect it in the future
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This chapter.....AMAZING
When Ivy was trying to attack the others I was thinking "C'mon Aden! Come and help!" And when he did I was surprised ouo felt like a mind reader...
Loved the Aden/Ivy fluff~ so cute >w< they are cute together owo
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Thanks!
I love it when I find out that my readers have psychic abilities. :3c
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Your Welcome~! ^-^
I think I know what Ivy was dreaming about...but it could be wrong xD Hope Ivy and Aden recover soon!!
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I think I do, not completely sure >3<
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Oh man it was Ivy?! Poor baby, she sounded so scared. What was she dreaming about? Dawwww, Aden and Ivy moment. Cute fluffyness. I want more of Ivy and Aden moments like this. Wounder what will happen next? Daww Aden's sleeping beside her. Young love is in the air.
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What she was dreaming about will remain a mystery for a very long time, I'm sad to say.
Who doesn't want more Ivy/Aden fluff moments like this is my question. :3c
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What is the grovyles actual name?
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That will not be revealed until chapter 28.
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awww. Well hurry up and get to chap 25! XD I can't wait.
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I'm close to finishing it right now, actually! If all goes well, you should see it by tomorrow morning!
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but morning will be here in thirty minutes. It's 11:37 here. XP
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Yeah, well, my internet goes out at midnight and I don't get it back until 5 am. So morning will be somewhere between 7 am and 9 am, most likely.
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lol I have a sneaky feeling but I wil not say. i have my storylocke going.(Victory dances.)
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that second-last part, with the biting...POWER!! on the wrong moment...
but the last...just...romantic...finally awake but so scared, getting comforted by some soft(y) touch, then...knock-out, and getting carried to bed by the same soft(y) who made you feel safe...
if only the others wouldn't find them in that position...would they know he doesn't 'try' but 'guards' her sleep?
'Misled'...my aswer: 'curious'
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I'm just a big sucker for writing romantic scenes like these ^u^
i really don't think he'd even think about 'trying' anything due on recent events
I'd be surprised if you weren't curious about the next chapter.
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no you don't, who made you think?
i know, right?
i played PMD-EoT/EoD, so no, not really.
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oh god
oh my god
i screamed, flailed, screamed, almost cried, screamed lOUDER OH YM GOD IVY
IVY BABY NO STOP NO IM AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
the poor eevee had a bad nightmare or visions which is worse and she went berserk aND IM JUST THIS IS PERFECT IF IT DIDNT COST MY HEART
AND ADEN
I JUST KNEW ADEN WILL SNAP HER OUT OF IT well he kinda did bUT STILL
THAT SCENE WHERE SHE BIT HIM N HIS POWERS WERE OUTTA CONTROL AAAAAAAA
SARAH
SARAH U GENIUS PERSON U AAAAAAAAK;HDFKHSKLSDS
AND
AND
AND
IVY SCARED
ADEN PROMISMENSKFSJDF
and Aden sleeping by her side fkjgshfjakjbdk ohohoh the next title is 'misled' now im just
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Your reaction makes everything worth it.
My work here is done.
omg not really i still have like 15 more chapters left i am no where NEAR done yet 8'D
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oh my god 15 chapters idk what to expect im just sO EXCITED NOW WAIT
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