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Published: 2004-08-09 22:07:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 23302; Favourites: 437; Downloads: 4305
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How I hate hermore than dried up lipstick, spam trying to sell.
more
than the bitter taste of milk gone to hell
you want me to feel well
And then you tell tell
"don't worry about her trace on my cock
and her blood on my heart
we are no more, and broken appart"
How I hate her
more than dolls prettier than mine.
more
than papercuts, maggots and people feelin "fine"
you tell me it's over
done and bye
but I still see her in your eye eye
it's such a lie lie
How I Hate Her
More than sickness in a wound, kids gone mad.
more
than the worst past memory I've ever had
you tell me she is dead
eaten and decomposed, less than dust
so..no more flirt flirt
only playing with dirty dirt
underneath her skirt
How I hate myself
More than all the girls you ever slept with.
more
than roadkills, wasps on icecream and pants I can't fit
you tell me you love me...alot..
almost as much as you loved her
How...
I hate
everything I say
How
I hate
to feel this way
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Comments: 179
Amazing poem... it evokes so much emotion. I just love these lines:
And then you tell tell
"don't worry about her trace on my cock
and her blood on my heart
we are no more, and broken appart"
and the part where you describe her dead. Very good use of imagery. I am so sorry you feel this way though. I don't think it is pure jealousy. I mean, it makes sense for you to feel this way and I don't think you should be ashamed of it.
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This is actually too true, I know how you feel "/
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Love this. And the picture. Its wonderfully amazing
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i can totally relate to this poem. weird, cause I faved this a long time ago, and now I'm going through them and I read it and now i'm like, shit man. Yes.
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I agree with Snyder. I think a lot of girls feel this way at some point in their lives, especially now days in which promiscuity is more or less promoted in our youth. I know that I have felt this way before
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Why does this sound so familiar...oh cuz this happened a day ago....
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as much as i hate to admit it, i know how that feels. i always have one of those. like, a guy that i love, and even if they say they are over that girl... you can't get over it. it makes me feel stupid every time, but there's always one.
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Words don't describe how I hate her.
and how I hate that he doesn't understand why.
But hese come close.
It's great.
and very accurate.
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exactly how i feel right now..especially the last part that summarises everything for me.
thanks alot.
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ohh.. i like a lot these poem.. its the way i feeling about someone..
really cool..^^
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I've felt that way loads of times. I love ou're poem
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I'm pretty sure we've all felt that way about someone before.
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I really like your poem...you described your jealousy (and possessiveness??) in a very good way..
I my self feel this beyond my control, and i can really get into your poem,
i stuggle a lot with all of my boyfriend's husspuppies (i have a poem on this...)
and because he cheated one me once before with someone who i thought was my friend.
I feel like this just makes my normally already jealous and possesive self even more so and
i tend to reach badly to things like him being with someone else or wanting someone else.
I feel like i should be over it but i'm not.
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I hate this feeling too, but I guess that's half the poem's appeal: relatability. That and how some of the words sorta "thud", like the "so..no more flirt flirt only playing with dirty dirt underneath her skirt" adds serious weight and breaks it up. Very well done!
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it is half one in the morning and was having a random browse when i found this and its strange coz i am the same way with some girl i hate a huge amount
im glad im not alone with all the hatred
u got this poem perfect for both of us
very well done
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I'm reading your lines and drooling at the awesomeness of them...
It's so.. beautiful *sadistic glee*. Kyaa, I adore poems like this ;]*** AMAZING!
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I hate to say that I know how you feel, that's too bold a statement. But I can say, that I feel close to this. And can relate.
I love a guy, who claims to love me, and another girl. But I'm his number one. It makes me sick.
So amazingly written poem
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Sounds like a sad story... hope something good comes from it
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the same hatred also touches me and my poetry.
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really good, i like it!
read 'last kiss' and 'forgotten' in my dA, it's more or less the same feeling^^
a kiss(K)
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Very dark poem, me likes lotz and lotz.
Well done.
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I think I saw someone say this earlier,
but it is quite lyrical,
could very well become a song if you so wished.
As for the content,
I'm sure there's many of us who can relate,
so that's another good thing about this.
I like it =]
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This made me feel so much better.
Perfect.
I love it.
The structure is really unique and intriguing, and the rhyme seems very natural, almost accidental.
Keep writing.
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I feel this girl's emotions. I feel like I can relate to this person, that deep down inside, I have these feelings too. I think this is what makes a poem great, the ability to make other people realize that they too have these unspoken emotions.
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omg you describe what i totally feel right now
it's a beautiful poem, faved
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Oh how i can identify with this poem....I love it for saying so eloquently how it is..... you have such tallent !
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Definitely what I felt some time ago (or still feel). I cant express how much i love your poem.
Klee
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wow. i am feeling the exact same thing, going through the exact same situation. it's like words right out of my mouth. your poem reallie reallie got to me..
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your work is dark and i like it. i like how much emotion it seems was put into it. its a beautiful work of art
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