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blindeyeinsight [2008-05-11 22:49:53 +0000 UTC]

I like this! Very simple and effective. I'm curious as to the details of your inspiration.

I hope you don't mind me throwing suggestions every time I see a new shot, but here goes anyway:

I think the model should be take up less of the page, maybe smaller and staying to the right or left , as if the words filling the screen is her thoughts.

And if you can tint her a little brown to fit her better into the shot, it think it would be perfect. I have no idea if that's easy or not... I sure don't know how to do that kind of thing... At least I don't think I do.

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