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Published: 2010-04-22 02:33:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 400; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Long hard winter nightsYou wrap your arms around me
And in the hearth or in the bed
There not a word is sounding
Where we think of a brighter day
One that is soon to come
That relieves ourselves of these darkest days
Which attach to limbs so numb
It fills us with a luminous vigor
And allows us to dismiss
This overhanging feeling of dark
To partake in Summer's bliss
Comments: 20
lol thx? I have had this up for a while now XD
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Dude, this is pretty amazing. I love it
WRITE S'MORE DAHMETTTTTTTTTT!!!!
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I don't know what my next topic should be XD
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This is really good Nalyx! I can't believe you've never written before. Its short, but its nice and simple and sweet. I enjoyed reading it and hope you continue to write more. Welcome to the literature side! ONE OF US!! Lol
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LOL I only ever write stories, and they NEVER turn out. XD The longest I have ever gotten was 36 pages and most of them were crap. XD
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you should still post some. maybe we can offer helpful criticism, y'know?
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It's not anything that needs criticism. lol
It's me not wanting to write anything. XDDD
I start a story with a little sliver of inspiration....and then I get bored an do something else XD
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ah. id stil like to read some
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LOL I could put the longest one on here, but it is really just a piece of crap work that I spent like three years writing randomly in, and you can tell, because the writing style changes and the random factor goes up exponentially.
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lol how about not. Its just a bunch of stuff that nobody actually cares about XD
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