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Fishlover — Midnight Stroll With Angel
Published: 2007-12-27 01:55:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 3845; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 0
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Advanced Critique Please!My god, I love how this one came out, though I still think I'm missing something in the far back of the pic in the background. It just feels so empty, plus I think I made some kind of mistake but I can't quite put my finger on it. It's Stitch taking Angel for a walk and he gave her a peach colored carnation which is tightly held into her hands x3
As for the background, I had to try making it out twice to get the right kind of shading for the leaves and lighting.
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wicked awesome, your good. No doubts there.
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Its great, but one thing I detect is on angels left eye her blue shine is slictly lower than the other one and Stitch's shines.
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o3o D'awww, this is very pretty, and romantic.. I like the moonshine/sparkles, i cant stop looking at it @w@
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its sooo romantic.
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no prob. keep the pictures coming.
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HOMG.
The clouds and the moon looks AMAZING. o.o I love how the leaves are falling everywhere. And Stitch and Angel's lineart is so smooth and pretty, and thei shading is pwnsome, and they both look awesome.
I think this is your best yet, Mags! ^^
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You have every right to be proud of this, its very pretty!
My only suggestion is varying the size of the sparkles, so they're not all the same size, its very repetetive xD
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in my opinion the picture is awesome. i like the moon and the tree. you are good drawing lilo and stitch experiments.
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are thats really cute ^^ just one comment if you want critique, the leaves look like a big tree is overhanging which is nice but I couple arn't really attached meaning they must be falling down, if thats true I suggest putting some leaves on the floor as well, if you get what I mean XD
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Tis a very beautiful pic, Mags. ^^ They look so cute.
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This is so cute and romantic. Top marks for this one!!
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Yes, I love how it came out too. ^-^ But one little thing I'd mention is that you tend to draw Angel's nose too big; around the same size as Stitch's. It's actually a bit smaller than his and with only one wrinkle above it, as opposed to the two wrinkles above his.
Also, do you use guidelines? I didn't for a long time, but my art improved significantly once I learned to use them. Here's a few suggestions:
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These helped me out alot! ~<3
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Perhaps a gazebo in the background? Just a suggestion.
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Aww, so cute! Maybe a shooting star is missing?? ( Just an idea..)
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I think the best part is the sky and the moon, very nice, the trees look fake but there is always room for improvement ;3
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Umm...I'm not a Critique person...sorry...I think its cute I love the way it turned out...its very cool.
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