kmascilak [2009-07-21 03:38:48 +0000 UTC]
you should be...since you can't actually tell what the picture would look like if there was more color contrast one shouldn't speculate on whether or not it would make the piece better (i know you have advanced critique on, im just saying). unless you can somehow nail darker reds/oranges in some post work (whether you've done some already, have the ability to, etc), i wouldn't worry about it or compare this piece to what it could be. if youre satisfied (which you should be) then I wouldn't encourage too much altering of this picture, but playing around never hurts. great picture though, really
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flaurencin In reply to kmascilak [2009-07-22 08:30:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for that comment. Thank you for your time and analysis. Il give a try to more colored version. And if I feel satisfied about it I'll add it.
I really appreciate critics and mainly when one tells me what could make my shot better.
Gratefully,
Fred
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NicholasJohn [2008-08-27 08:13:13 +0000 UTC]
I would be satisfied as well. I love the bright sun with the birds flyin through. The reflection of the boy/guy is a great touch as well. One thing I would look for is a bit more color contrast. I feel as if this photo needs darker reds/oranges. Just my thoughts.
My best "Advanced Critique.." haha
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flaurencin In reply to NicholasJohn [2008-08-27 08:27:48 +0000 UTC]
Advanced Critique is exactly why I'm publishing here. I really appriciate the fact you took some time to write this. And believe me I'll give a try.
I really feel grateful. Thank you.
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