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FleetingEmber — Devil Of The Night
Published: 2007-06-28 11:00:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 2091; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 41
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'Fear the wrath of God!'Devil Jin in all his glory. This piece really reminds me of Tekken 3, when he first gets given the devil mark on his arm in the opening FMV.
Jin has always been my favourite in the Tekken games. I was annoyed when his moveset changed in Tekken 4, but i soon got over it. I mean, Tekken 5 brought this beautiful beast, that is Devil Jin for us to pick. And besides, Devil Jin has all old Jin's moves
Anyway, my lineart's here if anyone want's to have a look
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Any comments or critique are greatly appreciated. I can't improve if i don't know where i'm going wrong, lol.
Coloured in: Photoshop
Time Taken: God, over ten hours.
Full view please! ^-^
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Comments: 30
oh. my. GOD. He is so FRIKKIN HOT! *steals him and runs off with him*
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lol! Are you a Tekken fan then?
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lol! It's a fighting game on the Playstaion
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Obviously I am not a fan of it if I don't know what it is XDDDD
But it might be fun.. though I'm not fond of fighting games.. I liek RPG's XD
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Yeah, RPG's rule fighting games anyday. I just like Tekken as i grew up with it ^-^
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lol that makes sense. ^-^
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It's fairly good. Hand's and feet could've been bigger and you forgot the leg-wear.
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Yeah i know ^-^ I'll have to do another Jin, and make him actually look good this time 
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looks like she's ready to swoop in for the kill
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*gives you a tissue*
^-^
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Outstanding job on the coloring and on the background! The lineart is also really good. Well done!
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Looks great!
Only things I'd notice have already been mentioned, the wing's a bit far down and the hands and feet are a bit small. 
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Really really good
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Love the detail and colour. :]
The hands and feet could be a tad bigger, though.
Great job. :]
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Thank you, and yeah i know. lol.
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The background details are awesome!
Great job on the colouring too!
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The other wing could be moved up a bit, but other than that..he looks pretty good.
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Ok, get ready for some constructive crits
His left wing sprouts from his shoulder but the other is coming from much further down his back. It's perspective problem. You have the same problem with the wall. I did dl your image and draw all your perspective lines on it to demonstrate how they go all over the place but I can't seem to paste it in. You have this problem to varying degrees throughout the image but the most obvious are the wings and wall, the hands and feet are a close second.
Other parts are great, you've done well with the shading, you've obviously thought about the lighting. Get a handle on perspective and you'll notice the difference in your images. Hope that helps in some way
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Thank you so much for this. It really helps, a lot. I never noticed the wing before, but now you mention it, i can see it so clearly. I've always had a perspective problem. I'm just not very good at picturing things in my head. Is there anything you can suggest which can benefit me?
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