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flerna — an awkward night

Published: 2011-09-24 20:03:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 654; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 7
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Description ok so this is an idea i have for the story ratchets got shot with the growth ray, but someone else shot him making his mind and body go ferral and here he's trying to keep himself together and not hurt scarlet whos worried about him.....

i yawned as ratchet laid down next to me resting his head on his clawed hand and letting me lean against him,
i looked up to his face and saw that only one of his tired eyes were open the emerald green that once made me smile, was now dark and struggling as the pupil was now slited
"ratchet?" i asked concerned as i leant back against his fur and torn shirt
"scar...." he replied though his voice was gruff and harsh not to mention a little louder due to his size
"you ok?"
"i will be, but promise me something scar" he stated as he sighed
i nodded and looked at his eyes not looking at the fangs that now filled his mouth
"i dont know how long i can keep my mind like this, or how long til my mind goes beastial, but once i do i dont want to hurt you"
"i know you wont" i interupted but he carried on
"if i do lose my mind i want you to run ok? just take clank and run"
i looked down sadly.... i didnt want to leave him but he had a point so after a few minuetes i nodded holding back the tears but i couldnt look him in the eye
ratchet held me closer as his breathing slowed to indicate him falling asleep, but i could make out a faint purring before hesitantly falling asleep myself
ok so what you think? tell me please

hope you like it ^^
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Comments: 17

SilentNobody [2017-10-06 22:49:05 +0000 UTC]

Here's a thought, Scarlet. Sing to him or climb up and give him a massage so he learns to associate your smell with positive memories and thus is less likely to attack you.

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SilentNobody [2017-07-21 23:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Did you write this story in the end? I'd love to read it.

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flerna In reply to SilentNobody [2017-07-22 19:11:01 +0000 UTC]

sadly i doubt this will be in the fan fic, but the story itself that this was an idea for can be read but has not yet ended

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SilentNobody In reply to flerna [2017-07-23 00:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Cool, where can I take a look?

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flerna In reply to SilentNobody [2017-07-23 00:44:32 +0000 UTC]

I think I have some chapters in the gallery under a different kind of vacation, that or check fan fiction.net

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wlaw45 [2011-11-06 18:42:20 +0000 UTC]

I SENSE EPICNESS AND CUTENESS AND SADNESS AND AWESOMNESS AND NESSNESS AND...um...YAY! ^^

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flerna In reply to wlaw45 [2011-11-06 19:58:59 +0000 UTC]

lol thank you , im planning on putting something like this in my fanfiction im working on
oh and ive been reading your story its doing good so far, but...the chapters are a little short, and i noticed a few spelling errors, not to be mean or anything just letting you know

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wlaw45 In reply to flerna [2011-11-06 20:08:04 +0000 UTC]

They were made literally at 3 in the morning so i'll be editing soon (when i can be bothered ^^) cant do anything about the length for laziness sake but I'll try to make them longer in the future ^^ Thanks for telling me!

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flerna In reply to wlaw45 [2011-11-06 20:10:11 +0000 UTC]

cool ^^ youve got a talent for story writing ^^

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wlaw45 In reply to flerna [2011-11-06 21:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow thanks!

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flerna In reply to wlaw45 [2011-11-06 21:24:37 +0000 UTC]

your welcome^^

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Mike-Le-Pearce [2011-09-25 20:45:21 +0000 UTC]

this is cool , the tones and textures really work well in the subtle setup, and the image is a sweet gesture in the face of bizarre circumstances, nice one

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flerna In reply to Mike-Le-Pearce [2011-09-25 20:48:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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TheBearbie [2011-09-24 20:06:56 +0000 UTC]

B-BAAAAWW!!! ;A; ITS SO CUTE BUT AT THE SAME TIME SAD!!!

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flerna In reply to TheBearbie [2011-09-24 20:07:31 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ so was the story good?

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TheBearbie In reply to flerna [2011-09-24 20:10:08 +0000 UTC]

YUSH!

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flerna In reply to TheBearbie [2011-09-24 20:10:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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