Comments: 17
diversdream [2011-06-11 08:48:26 +0000 UTC]
ok yur nuts this is a brilliant job mate
maybe you can do a raptor next time
see vipers everywhere - but what about the Raptors??!!
stephen
aussie
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TheFreighTrain [2008-09-27 00:41:24 +0000 UTC]
I see plenty of bullets...
The emphasis on the coloration is interesting in the drawing, and makes it stand out very much. I see why you wouldn't like it, but I think it tells a story of an interrupted happyness, and that is a story that needs to be told. So say we all.
... but it needz more gunz!
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fongsaunder In reply to TheFreighTrain [2008-09-27 07:46:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I'll upgun it after Im done with that Battlestar.
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Athane [2008-09-26 22:54:40 +0000 UTC]
Its a good shot, great colours
A tip on Galacticas munitions though. White tip...yellow glow at the back and a grey smoke trail following......still a great image though
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Athane In reply to fongsaunder [2008-09-27 02:11:48 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't say hopeless...just inexperienced...you'll get better over time
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Trekkie5000 [2008-09-26 21:52:45 +0000 UTC]
The weapon fire is fine. Tapered towards the back, showing momentum, and lighter in front, show dissipating heat (I'm speaking artistically, not from a physics standpoint). I think what would actually help here is if the gun itself were in the process of firing.
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fongsaunder In reply to Trekkie5000 [2008-09-26 23:50:32 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I was to lazy to show the gun firing. The coloring is off somewhat too.
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braden1986 [2008-09-26 18:45:53 +0000 UTC]
it does actually look good enough to pass as a still, and I do believe that you could do minor improvements in the weapon trails when you get better at weaponary
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coloneljinx [2008-09-26 14:53:25 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful, I love it man. Great job.
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