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Description A Colonial Battlestar engages three Cylon Basestars in an unknown nebula.

I hate this, but I had to post it because I spent so much time on it.

Someone teach me to draw weapons fire. I cant seem to get it right.
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Comments: 17

diversdream [2011-06-11 08:48:26 +0000 UTC]

ok yur nuts this is a brilliant job mate
maybe you can do a raptor next time
see vipers everywhere - but what about the Raptors??!!

stephen
aussie

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TheFreighTrain [2008-09-27 00:41:24 +0000 UTC]

I see plenty of bullets...
The emphasis on the coloration is interesting in the drawing, and makes it stand out very much. I see why you wouldn't like it, but I think it tells a story of an interrupted happyness, and that is a story that needs to be told. So say we all.
... but it needz more gunz!

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fongsaunder In reply to TheFreighTrain [2008-09-27 07:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'll upgun it after Im done with that Battlestar.

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Athane [2008-09-26 22:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Its a good shot, great colours

A tip on Galacticas munitions though. White tip...yellow glow at the back and a grey smoke trail following......still a great image though

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fongsaunder In reply to Athane [2008-09-26 23:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the tip. Im hopeless at drawing weapons fire.

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Athane In reply to fongsaunder [2008-09-27 02:11:48 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't say hopeless...just inexperienced...you'll get better over time

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fongsaunder In reply to Athane [2008-09-27 07:47:09 +0000 UTC]

Hopeless!

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Trekkie5000 [2008-09-26 21:52:45 +0000 UTC]

The weapon fire is fine. Tapered towards the back, showing momentum, and lighter in front, show dissipating heat (I'm speaking artistically, not from a physics standpoint). I think what would actually help here is if the gun itself were in the process of firing.

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fongsaunder In reply to Trekkie5000 [2008-09-26 23:50:32 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I was to lazy to show the gun firing. The coloring is off somewhat too.

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braden1986 [2008-09-26 18:45:53 +0000 UTC]

it does actually look good enough to pass as a still, and I do believe that you could do minor improvements in the weapon trails when you get better at weaponary

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fongsaunder In reply to braden1986 [2008-09-26 23:50:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the tip. Noted.

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coloneljinx [2008-09-26 14:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, I love it man. Great job.

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fongsaunder In reply to coloneljinx [2008-09-26 15:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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tll-bam [2008-09-26 11:43:44 +0000 UTC]

mm. i really like your mech drawings

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fongsaunder In reply to tll-bam [2008-09-26 12:11:23 +0000 UTC]

This aint no mech.

I hate this one. It's too colorful.

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tll-bam In reply to fongsaunder [2008-09-26 16:23:23 +0000 UTC]

ahh.. then i like your space ship then
colours are good

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fongsaunder In reply to tll-bam [2008-09-26 23:51:04 +0000 UTC]

It's just shiny.

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