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Published: 2013-07-26 01:31:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 573; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description Ok so this was fun.

I don't normally do human(ish) things as most of you know so this was a little out of my comfort zone, but I had a blast doing this. and who can resist a smexy demon like this guy here? XD

texture used in the background found here
Daemon belongs to ~Ningeko16
art by me ^^
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Ghastr [2013-07-26 02:06:12 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


First off, I'd like to say that I'm very impressed with this piece. I find that the colours used here very well communicate the emotion and atmosphere of the drawing. Considering that it is out of your comfort zone, you did an absolutely outstanding job. His facial expression seems to communicate with the viewer and gives off a very seductive vibe. It really says something when someone can look at a painting and really feel it.
I love how the light reflects on to his face and chest, though more attention to detail could help with really providing definition to the rest of his features. Dramatic lighting can skillfully be used to enhance more prevalent features and give a character a more "real" look. While the lighting was aptly used, there was a lack of shadowing in the deeper parts of the work. While it was still present, I feel that it could have been dramatized to enhance the whole of the painting. I'd like to compliment the flow of the fire from his palm, as it seems to entwine the rest of the piece and pull everything together. It was a truly beautiful part that is also stunning to look at.
The detail in the face and hair is stunning, although it makes the shirt seem almost menial in comparison. More structure, texture, and detail could have been used to make the shirt blend in with the look and feel of the rest of him.
Your vision in this piece is very clearly displayed. You can see the emotion that he is letting off. The theme and idea of it all is very well executed.
This piece is also very original. While the "holding a flame" idea is prevalent in a number of artist's works, I feel that you have put a spin on it with this unique character. It was, indeed, surprising the way is had all been put together in such a different way that was definitely not commonplace.
I do believe that you technique is skillful and well preformed, while only minor errors present themselves. I kindly reiterate that a more acute attention to definition and detail can be used to improve. Think about how something would really look if it were sitting right in front of you. Try to imagine how the shadows would fall and where the light would hit stronger in some places, and dimmer in others. All aside, you can tell that you have a true talent and skill.
This piece did have an very significant impact. I say it again and again, but the facial expression of the character is so real. Many artists struggle with these kind of expressions and the face seems stiff and immobile, while this seems to really smile and smirk like something truly living. It seems to communicate a superior and insatiable desire-- all in a few brushstrokes. All in all, it really does blow my mind that you are able to create a piece that is so truly ravishing and pleasing to the eye.

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Ghastr In reply to Ghastr [2013-07-26 02:37:04 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y-P8zH…

www.youtube.com/watch?v=D87W7N…

www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqH9ew…

www.youtube.com/watch?v=2XrGHB…


Two traditional, two digital. I used these when I was first learning texturing, shading, and highlighting traditionally. It also helps to use reference images. By the way, I don't have any sound on my computer, so I have no idea what is going on in the first two videos.


    Also, don't worry about the colours of the shirt. For instance, if you have a white shirt, use a deeper yellowish gray base tone, and use your highlight to show that its really a base tone. The more you practice, the easier it gets, I promise. You will eventually discover how to make it all work. c:

  If you ever have any questions or need help with anything, just note me and I'll help you as much as I can. (:


  I really wish I had more of my traditional work on dA. I realise I sound all hoity-toity without any real evidence that I actually know what I'm talking about. LOL

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forgetSanity In reply to Ghastr [2013-07-26 02:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Firstly thank you so very much. You pointed out a lot of things that I do have trouble with. really I could use help with more dramatic shading XD LOL as I am not comfortable with it T.T

thank you so much for doing this I actually think if I had made the shirt a different color I would have been able to incorporate it better as I have a problem with lighter colors and i know this T.T I worry that I'll lose what people think the actual color of the shirt should be and I need to stop with that XD LOL.

once again thank you so much and I'm glad you like it so much. if you know of any shading tutorials that i could look up i would love the help ^^ <3

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Ghastr In reply to forgetSanity [2013-07-26 02:37:38 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y-P8zH…

www.youtube.com/watch?v 87W7N…

www.youtube.com/watch?v=vqH9ew…

www.youtube.com/watch?v=2XrGHB…


Two traditional, two digital. I used these when I was first learning texturing, shading, and highlighting traditionally. It also helps to use reference images. By the way, I don't have any sound on my computer, so I have no idea what is going on in the first two videos.


    Also, don't worry about the colours of the shirt. For instance, if you have a white shirt, use a deeper yellowish gray base tone, and use your highlight to show that its really a base tone. The more you practice, the easier it gets, I promise. You will eventually discover how to make it all work. c:

  If you ever have any questions or need help with anything, just note me and I'll help you as much as I can. (:


  I really wish I had more of my traditional work on dA. I realise I sound all hoity-toity without any real evidence that I actually know what I'm talking about. LOL

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forgetSanity In reply to Ghastr [2013-07-26 02:45:17 +0000 UTC]

lol hey I always have to remind people you don't have to draw well to know when something is wrong XD LOL. but I can tell from your digital that you understand what you are talking about ^^

so no worries I am always looking for people that can help/ are willing to help and such thank you so much ^^  I will deffinetly take you up on your offer of input ^^

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Ghastr In reply to forgetSanity [2013-07-26 02:55:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha. I look forward to it.

Have an outstanding day/night/whatever xD

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forgetSanity In reply to Ghastr [2013-07-26 17:59:57 +0000 UTC]

Lol 

And thanks hopefully u had a good day/night

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Crazy-Voodoo-Lady [2013-07-30 07:40:32 +0000 UTC]

8B....... Daaaaaaaaaaaa-emon! X2

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forgetSanity In reply to Crazy-Voodoo-Lady [2013-07-30 22:16:49 +0000 UTC]

LOL XD

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Deliciousbutdeadly [2013-07-27 04:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Great work Kim!

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forgetSanity In reply to Deliciousbutdeadly [2013-07-28 03:04:41 +0000 UTC]

aw thanks grace ^^

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Deliciousbutdeadly In reply to forgetSanity [2013-07-30 07:12:09 +0000 UTC]

You bet happy early birthday also! I'm sorry I can't go to your shin dig at six flags.

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forgetSanity In reply to Deliciousbutdeadly [2013-07-30 22:18:31 +0000 UTC]

aw thank you T.T and no worries next time ^^

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Deliciousbutdeadly In reply to forgetSanity [2013-07-31 04:06:39 +0000 UTC]

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NinGeko [2013-07-26 02:03:14 +0000 UTC]

QuQ gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah all the awesomeness! I love the texture and love the...............oh screw it EVERYTHING! KJBALKBFABVBJFABVFLBFVALJDFLB


thanks so much, it's really wonderful~

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forgetSanity In reply to NinGeko [2013-07-26 02:24:56 +0000 UTC]

OH YAY I'm so glad like you have no idea how worried I was that you wouldn't like it lol

You are so very welcome <333

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NinGeko In reply to forgetSanity [2013-07-26 02:32:20 +0000 UTC]

eue you do know there is a reason I picked to do a trade with you right? I loves your art and ideas bro~ XD


tee hee

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forgetSanity In reply to NinGeko [2013-07-26 02:37:23 +0000 UTC]

T.T gosh your making me blush <33333333

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NinGeko In reply to forgetSanity [2013-07-26 02:45:53 +0000 UTC]

daaaaaaaaaaaaaaw I mean it ^u^ hope we do another some time~ XD

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forgetSanity In reply to NinGeko [2013-07-26 02:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Definitely ^^

and damn these icons you keep coming up with XD LOL

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NinGeko In reply to forgetSanity [2013-07-27 00:47:46 +0000 UTC]

woooooooooohoooooooooooooo


XD i love them so much~

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