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fortissimo β Valkyrie for Eriance
Published: 2007-06-06 04:48:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1216; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 29
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Drawing for Eriance. I see a lot of mistakes that I made, should have scanned the sketch before I inked it.
This is his character Valkyrie, dancing with one of those large Chinese ribbons.Valkyrie (c)
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ThatΒ΄s wonderful! The way you drew her expression, like em=njoying life, happyness and dance! ^^ Very nice idea of the water mark position, look like a kind pof magical wing
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I like the way you draw mechanical shapes. I need to work on that. Good Job!
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Pretty! Instafave! 
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holly huba huba!
You got revenge! This valkari is hotter than his.
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remember he did a hotter version of symphony?
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well i have to take it back now becuase, that sexy pose? drawing has changed my mind.
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I think that's personal opinion. 
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mmm this is nice, and the lines are quite ... is smooth the word? I mean clean and clear. the face is quite expresive (Eriance's pic of her that I managed to see shows her face quite... robotic and whitout feelings)
As you asked for a critique I will do it ( althought lately I hardly do a real one for some troubles I had with them in the past T.T, maybe I so severe)...
the pose is a good idea but somehow it ended quite simple, I guess in that moment you were thinking too much in 2d, that happens lots of time to me as well. Maybe it would improve if the left arm goes a bit to the viewer (cant express properly now O.o, my english is so baad).
Her left leg looks very odd in if we compare it with the right one. looks smaller in the inferior part, and looks more rushed. In fact the pic looks getting smaller in the downside and thats gives a bit odd feeling
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You can comment anything you need to on my work. I need the help to get better. :3
I had a lot of trouble trying to get the left leg (her right) correct, and in the end it looks more sideways than foreshortened. Hm, I will improve it!
Thanks! I think I am going to copy this over to a new piece of bristol paper and redraw the 'bad' parts.
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