Comments: 25
carpenterSTOCK [2007-10-04 01:20:13 +0000 UTC]
very very cool.
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DarklyJaded [2006-09-20 04:15:59 +0000 UTC]
oops, did not read the rest of your comment before (so spank me)
i know just what you mean
when a piece seems right
and if you did anymore to it
it could become less
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DarklyJaded [2006-09-20 04:14:27 +0000 UTC]
tell me, who is pablo neruda
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DarklyJaded In reply to Foxfires [2006-09-24 14:05:06 +0000 UTC]
i was just reading some of pablo's work and though this may sound egotistical, i can write like that, i often do.
so the question may be,
why am i waiting,
what holds me back?
is it the fear of ridicule
or that i would be misunderstood,
maybe it is the lack of confidence
for the world
in all its ways
hates a winner
and would rather one lose,
to join the others
in a sad,
lonely,
meaningless life?
Okay Aimee, I am holding you personally responsible for inspiring the low spark of creativity.
Should I continue this mad venture, then we both are to blame,
so I shall thank you for the loan of the 'muse'
and should I change my major to literary/journalism then I will blame myself
and then shoot myself shortly there after
pablo has a sense of writing that i did not think was 'acceptable' to the literary society,
this is not to take anything away from him it is just that i write in very much the same way
and i think my stuff is crap.
so does this make it good crap?
life continues to make less sense, day by day and sometimes moment to moment
I knew that author's tag would come in handy someday, now i need to find it and get my literary career going, again
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VirtualJammers [2006-09-17 16:55:32 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous work!!!! I think you're right - simple is better in this case.
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myrnajacobs [2006-09-17 09:49:16 +0000 UTC]
Really beautiful!
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IslandJoe [2006-09-16 22:58:57 +0000 UTC]
wow foxy... gorgeous...
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wizillusions [2006-09-15 21:54:33 +0000 UTC]
A nice work, very different than your normal stuff.
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cadynho [2006-09-15 12:44:10 +0000 UTC]
wonderful, sweety!
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RainfeatherPearl [2006-09-15 06:15:53 +0000 UTC]
oh honey....absolutely spellbinding! an instant fav definitely!!!
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Amritsar [2006-09-15 02:44:59 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous. The colors are beautiful. ^^
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Darkraifu [2006-09-15 00:17:36 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful work, the colors are just marvelous and you've really captured the feeling of infinity.
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bookworm12890 [2006-09-15 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]
This is really great! ^^ And yes, this seems to be one of those 'less is more' pieces. ^^
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