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Published: 2005-01-06 11:03:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description While I was sleeping last night
Someone whispered in my ear
That everything will be alright
And that you’ll be here
I hope that it’s not wrong
Because I want you with me
Now I’ll try and be strong
And all I can do is wait and see
Will my dreams come true
Will I sleep on your shoulder
Will it really be me and you
I can’t do anything but wonder
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Comments: 12

displacedpixil [2005-01-11 11:51:28 +0000 UTC]

I rekon its hits the nail right on the spot... It's really good and It's full of feeling... I really like it and I think you did a very good job... Short is sometimes really good because it gets to the point and you retain the readers attention....

Great work
displacedpixil

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foxy-eva In reply to displacedpixil [2005-01-11 11:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank u! I'm gald u liked it!

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sirdregan [2005-01-07 08:23:38 +0000 UTC]

the flow is great and i like it. But it's a little short, maybe you could add a few lines about this feeling, when you are awake again and realise that's not so simple and nothing will be allright that easy... (yes, i love depressive stuff )

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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2005-01-07 10:18:47 +0000 UTC]

Haha!
Thank U I'm glad u liked it!! I'm gonna work more on it! But I'm myself usually write depressing so I dont kno what this really came from!! haha!! Well well!

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sirdregan In reply to foxy-eva [2005-01-07 10:24:28 +0000 UTC]

hehe i think that is because the depressing stuff is a bit easier to write. It's hard to write about (for example) love without making it sound stupid.

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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2005-01-07 10:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it is!!
Or making it like all cute and way icky...!!! U kno...

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sirdregan In reply to foxy-eva [2005-01-07 10:33:08 +0000 UTC]

that's what i mean

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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2005-01-07 10:40:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah, okey! Well well!! haha!
I'm tiered...

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sirdregan In reply to foxy-eva [2005-01-07 10:59:29 +0000 UTC]

me too but i gotta work :7

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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2005-01-07 11:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Aw! I'm on a holiday from school but I start at monday.. I have a huge test on next Friday.... And I have to study for it.... sigh....!!
I'm going out tonight tho!! haha!!

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sirdregan In reply to foxy-eva [2005-01-07 11:40:30 +0000 UTC]

hehe i'll go out to.
But i don't know where - cinema or bowling. But i think we'll bowl tomorrow.

btw: I have a test on Tuesday, too *buarg*

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foxy-eva In reply to sirdregan [2005-01-07 11:48:49 +0000 UTC]

haha!! okey! I'm gonna go out clubbing with a friend... Hopefully we'll have a good time and be home by 6-8 something!!
I suck at bowling, but its very fun!!!

I hate test...!

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