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Foxy-Knight — No one else
Published: 2012-08-26 21:36:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 956; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 6
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I can be strong, but now I am weakAlone I drop the armor and come out of my shell
I need you, without you everything feels bleak
and there is no one else, who makes me feel this way
No one else who makes me feel loved
And lonely when I am alone
Our time will come, I know this to be true
but it still hurts, and tonight the pain cuts through
I make no noise but my tears are real
desperate for the love we make each other feel
No one else who makes me feel loved
And lonely when I am alone
I can be more than human for you
but tonight I am weak
and only for you will I cry for
and only you will I try for
because no one else makes me feel like you do
when we are together I am complete
without you I am hollow
I need you, I love you
I could love no one else like I do you
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Comments: 46
Really liked this, kind of reminds me of me and my boyfriend, really good work
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So far humanity seems to be a pretty prevalent theme in your poems. Does the concept of being more than human have some sort of special significance? I know to me its a very powerful saying that transcends the boring and average and becomes something spiritually better and greater, but that just me ^_^"
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Well it's only a theme used in a few pieces
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This is like a companion poem to More than Human. Such strong emotions. :*( Its great and sucky to be in love at the same time. lol
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That first sentence is really strong. I love it. xD
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Thank you very much my friend
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You're very welcome.
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glad you took the time to read my stuff
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My pleasure, hun.
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If you like DC stuff I have some of that. first draft, gonna rework it 2013
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Oooohhh...would you prefer if I read it after the edit or before?
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Well I'm still writing the first draft, gonna stop after chapter 40. But I'm getting people to review it so I can use that stuff to help me make the professional take much better.
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Ahh! I see. I'll have to check it out then. Thanks!
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Link is in the journal
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You are very welcome!
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This is a very powerful ode to love. 
You definitely have a way with words... things like hollow, I can be more than human for you, etc. Wonderfully written, I would only suggest that you use more punctuation. A period or comma here or there could do wonders for flow. 
Great work!
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Thank you kindly my friend
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very emotional and honest. guess nearly everyone knows this or a similar feeling...
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Thank you my friend, feel free to read the rest of my work
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this is so moving <3 keep on writing it'\s excellent
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thank you very much, keep reading what I have already written you'll like it
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i will defo will 
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oh thank you, it's sort of a link to my OC
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Awwwww! This is so sweet. 
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Have you tried reading your poem while listening to this- [link]
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Yeah I always like listening to music while on the internet. It kinda sucks the Titanic sunk. Stupid ice, not only it rots your teeth but it also destroys ships.
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well the signs were there my friend, the captain had the info and he made a mistake
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Yeah, note to self, if i'm ever a captain and I get reports of ice ahead, I slow down or stop, screw the delay.
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Hey I wonder what would happen if Batman would meet che for the first time.
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Well wonder all you want mate I'm going to bed
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