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nightshade-keyblade [2017-03-31 02:12:16 +0000 UTC]
Despite the religious allegory, I can see what motivated the poem here. As always, your topical poetry is timeless.
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Frank-Jaspers In reply to nightshade-keyblade [2017-04-03 22:35:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.Β
I'm glad you can see what it is I'm saying in this piece.Β
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Domaex [2017-03-27 23:57:53 +0000 UTC]
I got a feeling some of V's monologues from V from Vendetta in this poem. Well done!
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Frank-Jaspers In reply to Domaex [2017-03-30 02:13:59 +0000 UTC]
I've only seen that movie once. I'm a huge Natalie Portman fan, and I also like John Hurt.
It was a fun movie. I was not thinking of it when I wrote the poem. Very interesting observation though. Β
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tome77 [2017-03-27 11:18:12 +0000 UTC]
Interesting poem, I'm not going to claim I understood the entire meaning of it. I found it fascaniating and from my interpretation It seams you are criticising religion specifically Christianity and claiming it a cause of weakness and discourse among the impoverished. I would like to play a bit of a devils advocate in order to bring up parts of a different perspective. I would argue that the goal of religion is to unite groups of people and bound them to a community kind of like a government. Religion is but another tool to be used by humanity. How that tool is used be it well or poorly just like government is up to us its follower's. Now in defence for Christianity. The most widespread ideas are often the first of there kind. Christianity is not the first religion ever nor is it without flaws but it is the first to be printed and widely distributed via a book. That does not make it the best merely the most accessible at the time. Which for most was viewed as better then the alternative. I believe it up to us to determine what we choose to build our community upon and to ensure it something worthwhile.
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Frank-Jaspers In reply to tome77 [2017-03-30 02:12:53 +0000 UTC]
Our intentions to present a particular meaning in a poem or work of art
are often very different from the interpretations of readers and viewers.
Everyone, however, is entitled to their interpretation.
I don't intend to disparage Christianity whatsoever. Christianity was a great uniting force in European history. Β
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SerenAletheia [2017-03-27 10:31:38 +0000 UTC]
The prose he espouses is easy on the tongue
So much so that empty ignorance seems profound.
Exactly!!! You nailed it here. I personally do follow Jesus, but other than being more sympathetic to Catholicism than anywhere else, I don't go to church. And I don't preach. And I detest American Christianity, because it IS this poem. Well done!!
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Frank-Jaspers In reply to SerenAletheia [2017-03-30 02:10:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I'm glad you appreciate.Β
I certainly had no intention of deriding the Christian religion.Β
I think everyone should be respected in their own choices concerning faith.Β
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