Comments: 31
K-hermann [2013-07-04 17:11:12 +0000 UTC]
it sound good
the leg have problems also
hard to explain
the right leg need more movment to us.
More bending
to add more dynamic but not too much
the rest is easy win GG
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FreeMech In reply to K-hermann [2013-07-05 05:52:29 +0000 UTC]
I see what you mean. But I think that if you could see her feet that would have cleared up a little bit of the confusion. Also I think an equal problem to the right leg is her left leg. I should've added more shadow to separate the two and it should be just a little bit smaller from the calf and lower. But yes. There is a certain dynamic grace that I couldn't quite capture that was flawlessly represented in the photo I referenced.
I appreciate the observation and your kind words all the same. Thanks!
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K-hermann In reply to FreeMech [2013-07-09 09:23:37 +0000 UTC]
Ok then!
No problem
keep it up
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paws4thot [2013-05-09 11:40:24 +0000 UTC]
Since you ask specifically about the perspective, I'd say it's fine, based on the presumptions of a shallow depth of field throwing pretty much everything not the figure out of focus, and her walking uphill towards a pass.
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FreeMech In reply to paws4thot [2013-05-09 13:21:15 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the feedback. It was bothering me but then again i thought it may just be my mind playing tricks on me.
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paws4thot In reply to FreeMech [2013-05-09 14:07:56 +0000 UTC]
No problems; I specifically mentioned depth of field / focus because that's a fairly rarely underused technique in both painting and digital art compared with in photography (and, slightly oddly, Anime).
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FreeMech In reply to paws4thot [2013-05-10 18:52:01 +0000 UTC]
Hmm. I never noticed that before. Funny thing is I learned the technique from a tutorial on how to make your drawings look like anime screenshots. Before then I didn't even know Gaussian Blur existed. haha
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FreeMech In reply to EzJedi [2013-05-08 23:51:43 +0000 UTC]
thank you! I really appreciate the feedback!
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FreeMech In reply to EzJedi [2013-05-09 13:19:52 +0000 UTC]
i agree. SBP is much smoother when it comes to sketching and even line art.
And thanks again.
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FreeMech In reply to EzJedi [2013-05-09 13:34:15 +0000 UTC]
haha. same here.
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FreeMech In reply to PretzelPrescott [2013-05-08 21:18:48 +0000 UTC]
haha. Thanks. Just keep drawing and you'll keep getting better.
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PenBee [2013-05-08 15:58:12 +0000 UTC]
I like the strong angled pose as she is walking towards the desolate wasteland. It really captures the mood and this is a great use of color. It isn't too bright or too muted. It is a great mix to draw the eye up and down the page. I do wonder if it hard to walk through the desert in such tight, spandex cutoffs.
I would also suggest maybe have a few strands of her hair blowing in the wind just as her cap to continue that feeling of slow, rustling action against maybe a current.
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FreeMech In reply to PenBee [2013-05-08 16:17:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the feedback! I kept looking at the hair wondering what was missing and I think you nailed it. Seems strange for it to be staying still as her poncho is blown violently by the winds.
As far as her outfit I understand what you're saying and I agree. But the thing is, while she often does travel the desert, she never really does so on foot or in the clothes that you see her in. At the immediate moment of this drawing she didn't actually choose to be in the desert and instead was kidnapped and tossed in the desert.
I suppose I could have done more to convey that to the viewer. Bruises. Blood maybe. Especially since there is no physical copy of the story for anyone to read to know this.
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Art-Eater [2013-05-07 22:52:04 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!!
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MarsNeverSleeps [2013-05-07 22:49:24 +0000 UTC]
It looks good broski!!
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MarsNeverSleeps In reply to FreeMech [2013-05-08 08:48:54 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely! I love/hate when sketches turn into full on illustrations. I love it cuz they are usually a pretty cool idea, hate because it's usually on the corner of the page or something! fml
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FreeMech In reply to MarsNeverSleeps [2013-05-08 16:19:50 +0000 UTC]
haha. hell yeah. And it usually starts out extra small if it's among other sketches.
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