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Published: 2006-01-07 15:26:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description He is like Yin and Yang
With Light and Dark
Good and Bad
Love and Hate

And yet, he balances easily
He knows when he's alone
He knows when we're here

Yin and Yang
Light and Dark
Good and Bad
Love and hate
He is like Yin and Yang.
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Comments: 6

nightmary [2006-01-08 04:44:39 +0000 UTC]

well.. if you're conditioned to think "He" == an understood "God" then i could see it.

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Freezie In reply to nightmary [2006-01-08 05:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah But I'm not religious. And my teacher should know that.

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h3llf1r3 In reply to Freezie [2006-01-10 14:35:22 +0000 UTC]

yeah, kill your teacher.

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Freezie In reply to h3llf1r3 [2006-01-10 14:51:49 +0000 UTC]

hm. Thats a good idea. -plots-

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h3llf1r3 [2006-01-07 20:06:37 +0000 UTC]

well, who the hell is it about?! jk, it doesn't matter. i thought it were similes that used "like" or "as".

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Freezie In reply to h3llf1r3 [2006-01-07 21:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. But my teacher said it was alright to start the poem with a simile... -nodnod- But the extended metaphor is carried throughout the poem.

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