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fish-o [2010-09-09 12:10:02 +0000 UTC]
The first thing I notice here are the arms. I know theres exceptions to everything, and I've met some people with extremely short arms, but mostly, the fingertips end somewhere in height with your gential area, to put it nicely. In this picture, I'd say her fingers should end somewhere slightly below the middle of that strap-thingie with bows on. Otherwise, I think the shape of her body looks cool.
She looks a bit awkward in the pose, but those things get better the more you draw, theres really no secrets to how you make someone look natural except just looking at people around you and how they move and behave.
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Ascending-Storm [2010-09-04 19:30:22 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic work on this! I like the monochromatic feel to the piece
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