Description
Updated! Wehew! Currently lacking a headshot because I got lazy, hopefully that'll appear in the future. Anyway, this is my little boy from ThunderClan in all his glory, with slight modifications done to his design and so forth. The small pelt chart does not contain the stripes (they can be added after artist's wish, for the most part), since they'd be way too complicated to use anyway.
His written app will probably be updated eventually.
| General Information |
Name: Crookedkit | Crookedpaw | Crookedfang
Age: 24ish moons
Gender: Tom
Breed: American Short Hair Mix
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Warrior
Sexuality: Heterosexual, but bi-curious.
Activity: N/A
Crushes: None yet.
Mate: Open
Fertility: Due to Crookedfang being a tortoiseshell, it's pretty likely he'll be infertile.
Belief in StarClan: None whatsoever.
| Personality |
+ Honest - "You've got a bit of fur poking out right there, you know..."
This cat will tell you whatever's on his mind, no matter when or what situation he's in. Be it he's encountering a friendly and polite cat, or a hostile and furious cat. He'll tell you exactly what he thinks of the situation, and gives you clear messages on whether he likes you or not. This usually leads to an easier solving of cases, and he's usually seen as a good listener and helper in difficult situations.
+ Charming - "Oh... Sorry, I swear I wasn't staring at y-you..."
Charmingly cute, one might say! He doesn't know much about flirting, and will probably never be a good flirt either. However, he does seem to have the ability to unconsciously charm the ladies. Whether it's because of his clueless behavior or his stuttering, we'll never know.
+ Loyal - "ThunderClan is, and always will be, my home!"
Despite lacking the feeling and wish to die for his clan, Crookedfang has shown innumerable times that he is, and always will be a ThunderClan cat. He's fiercely protective of his borders, and lashes out at anyone who may criticize his birth-clan. It can be thought that Crookedfang does not have loyalty towards the cats of ThunderClan though, but rather to the territory.
+/- Clumsy - "Oops! *falls face-first onto the ground*"
Come again? Yes, he's really clumsy. Especially when running, in which he can often be seen falling, stumbling or genuinely messing up his running technique to such a degree that it slows him down quite a lot. However, his clumsy falls and stuttering tongue may also cause him to come off as charming and sweet. His clumsiness leans towards the negative side though.
- Pessimistic - "What's the point in trying? We'll all die anyway..."
Oh StarClan, this cat doesn't do much but believe the end is near! He sure doesn't bring any positive energy to the game, and isn't very good with pep-talks, since he'll most likely end up being overly honest and do a "realistic analysis" as he calls it. In most cases, his "realistic" readings of situations are the worst outcome of the event though.
- Hot-headed - "Say WHAT? You think I'm temperental? Why you little-"
Ohoho, watch out! A single word can get this tom fired up, and when we talk about fired up I mean REALLY fired up! He'll jump at your throat if you critize him in the wrong manner, or merely do anything whatsoever to annoy him. He flies to his paws in an instant.
- Vain - "Oh no, oh no, oh no! My fur got mud on it?! *scream of desperation*"
His unusual coat for a tom really makes this tom think highly of his fur, and his physical looks. Even though his ear's torn and his tooth's crooked doesn't mean he won't care about what he looks like, right? It's very important for him to keep his coat clean, and this clearly expressed vain attitude oftenly confuses and annoys cats he encounters.
| Appearance & Battle Statistics |
This is a tom whom belongs to a very rare kind: Tortoiseshell toms. Yes, you heard me right. The three colours flashing across his body consists of the colours dark brown, orange and white, the three together bringing him in for a tortoiseshell-like look. Since this colour-variations is almost exclusivly found in she-cats though, he has a rather large risk for being infertile/unable to have kits. Even Crookedfang doesn't know if that's the case or not.
He's fairly skinny, and with long legs that makes him look taller than most toms. In fact, he'd slide right into WindClan had it not been for the one failure: he is really clumsy and has a tendency to fall over his own paws when running. This slows him down drastically (as seen in his battle statistics). Otherwise he carries a torn ear from his apprentice days (explained in the history section), as well as a crooked tooth poking out from the left side of his mouth. Other than that he is a fairly normal tom.
Attack:
Tactic:
Endurance:
Speed:
Strenght: Red bullets shows how accomplished he is in each of the skills.
| History and Relationships |
Kithood
At one terribly cold winter day, Crookedfang's mother was outdoors in the search for food. She was fairly old, and did not believe she could get any more kits, when disaster struck. She'd gone pregnant for a while without noticing, and gave birth in the snowstorms to a tiny, feeble figure. The only kit in the litter; Crookedfang. The journey back to the camp was long and tough, and she believed the kit to be dead several times. He survived, however, and showed no signs of weakness from that day forth. However, since his mother was so old at the time of pregnancy, he recieved a deformity: a crooked tooth that poked out of the side of his mouth. He'd never be able to close his mouth without this tooth being visible.
Crookedkit was a happy and lively kit, growing up in the ThunderClan nursery with his mother. His mother was old though, and died before he'd completed his last moon in the nursery. Around this time, cats began questioning his heritage as well, considering he was starting to get abnormally long legs for a kit. Many began pondering that his mother had been disloyal, mating with a WindClan cat to produce a half-clanner. This remains unknown to this very day.
Apprenticeship
As he became an apprentice, without any mother to watch over him, nor any siblings or relatives whatsoever. He was assigned a mentor whom was known for a heavy temper, although it was thought that this mentor would be careful and forgiving in the presence of a cat as young as Crookedpaw. They were wrong, however. His mentor was foul and hot-headed, and ended up accidentally tearing the young cat's ear in a moment of anger and frustration as the young apprentice failed to do the tasks he had been told to do.
During his apprentice moons, these bad traits of his mentor's rubbed off on him, and Crookedpaw became just as short-tempered and foul as the elderly warrior. Eventually he became very bothered about his mentor in general, and was almost glad when the tom died. Fortunatly for Crookedfang, the elderly warrior died right before his warrior ceremony and thus he did not have to have another cat assigned to him as mentor.
Around these times, Crookedfang began seriously looking into his heritage, only to find it impossible to find any traces after his father. His mother had had many relationships with several toms, as he soon learned. Hurt by the fact that his mother had not chosen to have him with the single tom she loved over everything on earth, he swore to never mention her name ever again. And so he goes on till this very day, refusing to speak his mother's name, the she-cat whom he'd thought was sweet and innocent, purely a victim of blissfull love. He had theories on whom his father was as well, but never pursued the issue, as he no longer wished to know where he came from.
Despite all of this, he missed his mother more than anything. Without the belief in StarClan, he finds it difficult to see himself reuniting with her again, to finally smell her familiar scent and talk out their issues.
Warrior
In his warrior days, Crookedfang became genuinly more quiet, keeping more to himself to avoid his angry outbursts. His biggest fear would be to become so angry he'd fly at a youngster, like his mentor had done. Still, he enjoys life within ThunderClan, even though the scale plague is setting his fur on end, and he believes this is the end of the clans.
Soon after the plague ended ("Pha, mere luck!") and Crookedfang found himself out of things to complain about. As he has aged quite a bit since then, he's become a lot more mature, although still struggles a little when he's forced into situations that requires his social abilities put into motion. This is one of the more important things that has stuck to him despite his maturing, the entire clumsiness when he's posed in front of other cats for a little too long is still apparent but he's improved. At least he's more able to keep his anger to himself, with the exception of sarcastic comments every now and then.
Father: Unknown
Mother: Deceased
Siblings: None
Codes
- Enemy/rival
- Prepared to kill at sight
- Mild hatred
- Strong hatred
- Friend/ally
- Good friend
- Best friend
- Family
- Light jealousy
- Envy
- Crush
- Love
- Mentor/apprentice
- Mate
- Respect
- Idol
- Discomfort, embarrassment
- Annoyance, frustration
- Uncertainty
Strike - Dead
ShadowClan
NoneThunderClan
None
WindClan
None
RiverClan
None
SkyClan
Doestep [|] - "Okay, so she turned out to be a better cat than I thought. Well, a good cat for a SkyClanner, at least! And even though I hate to admit it, she could turn out to be one of my best friends! Ugh, what would mom think of me if I befriend a SkyClanner..?"
Marbleheart [||] - "Oi, this she-cat ruffled my pelt both verbally and physically! All out of nowhere she goes ahead and attacks me! What's that for?! All I ever did was make her stop snoring so loudly, and suddenly she's ready to jump at my throat. Filthy SkyClan cats."
| Roleplay Sample |
Why, this was very exciting! He could tell, by the way they were hushed up by their mothers that this was the moment they'd waited for! Such excitement had he rarely felt, than when he walked with the rest of the kits up to be presented. "Oh wow! This is epic!" he meowed loudly, causing a ripple of laughter among the cats on the front row. After a quick glance at Flarestalker's cold stare, Nettlekit lowered his head and clamped his mouth shut, getting that he ought to stay quiet for the rest of the ceremony.
As each one of the kits were called up to gain their 'paw, Nettlekit became more and more eager. As the mentors were named for the first kits, Nettlekit's jaw fell open. Both the leader and the deputy were taking on kits this time around? Even though he was amazed and thrilled for Cinderkit - paw now, and Ink-paw whom had gotten such fantastic mentors, he couldn't help but feel the green monster of envy rumble within his chest. He'd hoped Pallidstar would have taken such a liking to him that he'd pick him for his apprentice.
Even so, he was not disappointed when his own turn to be called came. He puffed out his chest happily and smiled broadly. Phantomscream was going to be his mentor. Ghostpaw's mother! Imagine all the time they could spend together! He'd have to convince Pitchfur into joining them on as many hunting patrols as possible, it'd be so much fun!
At Ghostpaw's too early outburst, he looked at her, grinned sheepishly and shook his head. He simply could not believe this.
Finally, when the ceremony came to an end and they were allowed to step down and share tongues, Nettlepaw rounded at Ghostpaw and inhaled a big bunch of air, biting his lip. "We did it, Ghostpaw! We're apprentices for real now!" he said, releasing all the air in a high-pitched squeal of joy that surely caught the attention of every cat left in the clearing. "C'mon!" he said and touched her shoulder lightly with his tail, before he set off through the entrance to the camp, stopping momentarily to respectfully touch noses with Phantomscream, yelling that he'd be back soon before he vanished out the entrance.
| Roleplaying Status and Availability |
Skype: Yes, but only as last resort (due to privacy reasons).
dA notes: Yes.
Any other sites: Sure, just ask.
Open/Closed for new RPs?: Open.
Willing to do RPs of any rating. Just tell me beforehand what we're heading into.
Comments: 81
Wildfire-Tama [2015-04-04 21:34:30 +0000 UTC]
So handsome <3<3
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meg-ham [2014-12-08 20:21:11 +0000 UTC]
heya frisk! wanna rp my kit Gullkit and this chunk of awesomeness?
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Friskusis In reply to meg-ham [2014-12-10 10:10:21 +0000 UTC]
Yesss, I'd love to! Just know that I've got a lot to do this week/next week, so my replies might be a bit delayed... Otherwise I think it'll be fine. <':
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meg-ham In reply to Friskusis [2014-12-11 07:45:28 +0000 UTC]
great! yeah I'm really busy these two weeks too, maybe I'll send one at the weekend and we can both slowly rp from there XD
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Friskusis In reply to meg-ham [2014-12-21 18:34:18 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! It's a while since you posted that, but meh. I'm in no hurry. xD
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Friskusis In reply to Wildfire-Tama [2014-09-01 10:42:19 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to! I've got a lot to do though, so I don't really know how often I'll reply... I'll try to reply once a week at least, depends on what I'm doing at/after school that week. I'm assuming you want to RP with Crookedfang? It's a shame to hear SkyClan's inactive... There's been little happening in Shadow/Thunder as well, haven't done an activity check since I started in this group. :/
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Wildfire-Tama In reply to Friskusis [2014-09-01 21:38:56 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's okay <3 I will be busy too from now on! Yeah... they are having a big battle with ShadowClan I guess so maybe that will help? I'll see how it goes haha. Aww well I am sad to hear that Thunder isn't too active either.... maybe I just can't win! xD And yes, I was thinking Crookedfang. Doestep doesn't know any others haha
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Friskusis In reply to Wildfire-Tama [2014-09-02 08:35:46 +0000 UTC]
Mmm, it might make her more tempted to move out from her clan I suppose! Haha, we could always bring more activity to ThunderClan, no problems there. d: Anyway, if you're up to starting one right now I'd be all for it as well! I think it's a lot of fun to RP them. c:
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Friskusis In reply to Wildfire-Tama [2014-09-03 06:30:45 +0000 UTC]
I've used it for other purposes, but never for RPing. If you prefer them I'm willing to try though!
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Wildfire-Tama In reply to Friskusis [2014-09-04 00:32:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay great! I will set it up at some point and then note you!
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halseycat [2014-08-26 23:41:27 +0000 UTC]
I think it would be really interesting to see how he and Featherpaw would interact since she is so perky and loving xD
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Friskusis In reply to halseycat [2014-08-27 11:10:48 +0000 UTC]
Crookedjaw would probably be his grumpy self and snap when she begins showing off her loving personality... If there's one thing Crookedjaw hates, it's loving cats. d:
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halseycat In reply to Friskusis [2014-08-30 00:07:16 +0000 UTC]
lol I KNOW that's why I think it would be hilarious hahaha
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Friskusis In reply to halseycat [2014-08-31 06:57:20 +0000 UTC]
We should definitely do it! I think I've got enough with replying to the ones I've got already though, maybe we could do one a little latur? <:
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halseycat In reply to Friskusis [2014-08-31 13:30:17 +0000 UTC]
yeah I understand LOL just let me know when you want to ^^
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Friskusis In reply to halseycat [2014-08-31 15:43:40 +0000 UTC]
Maybe we could do one after we finish the Ghost/Nettle one? c:
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Mortikat [2014-08-01 17:27:54 +0000 UTC]
>.> Psssst Your fur texture only equals 90%.
This guy's a cutie. :3 I like him.
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Friskusis In reply to Wildfire-Tama [2014-07-19 17:02:27 +0000 UTC]
Hurray! Bwahaha, sounds awesome! ;D
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FaIIenShadows [2014-07-17 12:41:17 +0000 UTC]
Would you like to rp with Morningbreeze of ThundeClan?
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Friskusis In reply to FaIIenShadows [2014-07-19 17:02:00 +0000 UTC]
Sure! Just go right ahead and send a starter and we can take it from there. ^^
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Attic-Salt-Storms [2014-07-04 21:16:17 +0000 UTC]
We've got to Rp sometime with this guy, he has a very nice design ~
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Attic-Salt-Storms In reply to Friskusis [2014-07-06 23:27:38 +0000 UTC]
XD
Send me a note whenever or would you like me to?
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Friskusis In reply to Attic-Salt-Storms [2014-07-07 11:02:32 +0000 UTC]
Would love if you could, I've had a hard time finding the right words for my posts lately... d:
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Attic-Salt-Storms In reply to Friskusis [2014-07-07 11:39:16 +0000 UTC]
Marbleheart, She's my only TBT character XD
It's okay I'm a little distracted today too
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Friskusis In reply to Attic-Salt-Storms [2014-07-07 14:39:11 +0000 UTC]
*facepalm* I should have realised. cx
Anyway, would just meeting up at the TC/SC border be alright? They could end up chatting, quarreling etc.
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Friskusis In reply to Wildfire-Tama [2014-07-03 13:23:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And it's the sad truth about torties, I'm afraid... :/ If he was to be fertile I'd have to ask the admins about it, considering tortoiseshell fertile males are extremely rare and more or less abnormal in nature's standards.
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Wildfire-Tama In reply to Friskusis [2014-07-03 13:30:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's near impossible for you to have a male calico who is fertile... but... still possible, right? Someone's gotta do it! Although I think it would be more interesting if he can't. It would be such a sweet love story for his future mate, who loves him even though they can't have kits together.
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Friskusis In reply to Wildfire-Tama [2014-07-03 13:37:47 +0000 UTC]
Agreed. If he ends up finding a mate whom wants kits, I might consider shooting a message in the admin's direction and ask if it's possible, but I actually think that the entire story of his is more interesting if he can't reproduce, like you said. c: That was my plan when I created him, anyway.
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Friskusis In reply to Wildfire-Tama [2014-07-03 15:33:30 +0000 UTC]
Mhm, there's totally a possibility for that! So far I think I may try to keep him well away from relationships though, I want him to be free from love for as long as possible. owo
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squirralpaw [2014-07-03 04:51:59 +0000 UTC]
er mer god man, why do you always make such cutie pattoties? ;U;
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Friskusis In reply to squirralpaw [2014-07-03 08:18:49 +0000 UTC]
I don't knoow. Most of my characters doesn't turn out that good, but I'm actually pleased with both Nettlepaw and Crookedfang's designs. Idk why, but TBT makes me design things that I love. ;w;
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squirralpaw In reply to Friskusis [2014-07-03 08:35:24 +0000 UTC]
//Strokes Nettle and Crooked
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squirralpaw In reply to Friskusis [2014-07-03 08:49:38 +0000 UTC]
Dude, i wanna make MarshXNettle a real thing, the kit design i made is fab
Marsh became such a pedo
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Friskusis In reply to squirralpaw [2014-07-03 09:23:37 +0000 UTC]
Ahaha, sure! I've already made several strange shippings myself, I don't mind if you want to ship those two as well. xD
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