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Fuwa2-Kyara — Inside Stories Prologue1 Draft
Published: 2007-05-12 15:55:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 758; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 9
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I have no confidence what-so-ever to write the fic, so I'll make an attempt to draw a manga version instead.This is an AU (Alternate Universe) kind of story. The turtles are heading home, when they get sent to an alternate universe where the have to find out about themselves and regain their lost memories.
Veeery predictable so far, but I'm hoping I can make a few plot twists to make things interesting... but you know... I haven't written a story in YEARS.
The way the panels are set up, I like. The way I set the characters and objects in the pic... I don't like.
The last panel was supposed to have the turtles appear like they're looming over you, but it looks flat. DX And I'm not proud of the background either.
R... rambling too much. Can you guys tell what the guys are doing? (No speech bubbles in prologue)
大分前から考えていたアイディアをやっと一ページ描いてみました。
これはパラレルの亀Ficのはずだったんですが、Fic にはぜんっぜん自信がありませんのでマンガにしました。
遠近法がない気がしますわ。TwT
いちおう、亀達が何をしているか分かりますか？
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Let me guess...They go into the subway after getting food and something happens and the whole scenery changes, and instead of being in the subway they are in front of a book store? My guess X)
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LETS SEE , THEY GO Went shopping MIKEY See THAT THE Comics Store Closed AND HE IS IN Shock AND HIS BROTHERS LOOK AT HIM AT TO STORE AND RAHP SAID WELL WHO KNOW THAT CLOSED THE STORE . HOW IS IT?
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WAAAAHHH!!! DON'T YOU DARE CRITISISE YOUR WORK DAMMIT!! YOU ARE THE BEST FAN ARTIST OF THE TURTLES I'VE EVER SEEN!!! I WANT YOU TO TEACH ME FUWA-SENSEI!!! i wish i could draw the guys like you can...man, i'm so jealous...i want u to draw me chillin' with my main turtle Raphie...SERIOUSLY!! but that's kewl...i know ur busy being awesome...but if by some miracle you would like to i would be eternally in your debt because you are super kewl, and buttkick, and awesomely awesome drawer-er and-
Raph: OKAY!! SHE GET'S IT!!! geez...give it a rest would ya'?
Michelle (amyanime): OKAY, CALM DOWN!! *mumbles* maybe you could focus a little more on the fact that i called you "My main turtle" huh?
Raph: *realizes she DID say that*.......O//////O
Michelle: Hell yea. anyhoo, if you would be interested in granting the megar wishes of a lowly fangirl i would LOOOOOOOVE YOU FOREVER!!!!
Raph: O.o
Michelle: NOT LIKE THAT, YEW PERV!!! anyway, im sorry i ramble so much...just message me or reply and i'll send you a description on how i look! but dont feel obligated....GOD, STOP IT MICHELLE!!! Okay, i'm done...seriously...LATERZ!! XP
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Sweet! I agree with the rest of the Deviants you should continue the story! I wanna know want happens especially with Mikey! 
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I like this, too, and will continue reading it. It looks to me like they're obviously walking home from grocery shopping and stop at a bookstore because of a strange feeling (last panel)?
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They're curious beause they never noticed the bookstore being there before. Thank you for noticing!
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I quite like the last panel, it's clear they're drawn from an angle, but not so much looming. This is awesome.
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The backgrounds look fine! I'm very interested in where this leads.
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Oo... it sounds so interesting... I'm kinda like that with stories myself... I STINK atwriting them. Drawing them out... I still need work @.@ But the idea sounds interesting so far 
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Du-huuuuuuude...NICE panelling, dear. 
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New style turtles with a classic touch. I like it.
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It looks good to me, very good even. Maybe you're being too hard on yourself? ^_^
Anyway, a story in manga form sounds like a lot of fun! ^_^
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Fuwa, your backgrounds are amazing
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wow, that looks totally awesome!!! 
i wish i could draw like you 0.o
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