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GaarasBabe — fathers will

Published: 2007-04-04 14:33:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 661; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 16
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Description this is my second poem for deviant art!
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Comments: 16

anime-iz-addicting [2008-08-15 16:21:27 +0000 UTC]

awww poor gaara

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XxRavenUchihaxX [2008-08-01 13:51:44 +0000 UTC]

oh wow that was really cool! you wrote that?! poor gaara!!

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GaarasBabe In reply to XxRavenUchihaxX [2008-08-05 02:46:06 +0000 UTC]

._. why ppl keep asking that XD

yes i used to take pride in being a writer but now i dont right as much cuz my spelling suck X.x

gaara is such a sad and misunderstood sweetheart...

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XxRavenUchihaxX In reply to GaarasBabe [2008-08-05 12:42:27 +0000 UTC]

ppl keep asking 'cuz its awesome and looks like it could be quotes from a song or something, 'cuz its that awesome

your writing is good though. you write nice poetry, i think you just need a beta reader. ill be your beta! i excel in english literature, i just dont have much time to write a lot of my own stuff so i just work as a beta for some people.

if you're willing to keep writing, ill be your beta!

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GaarasBabe In reply to XxRavenUchihaxX [2008-08-05 15:21:36 +0000 UTC]

my sister and i have a beta for our fanfiction but it got annoying... maybe ill try a beta reader again... yeh why not

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XxRavenUchihaxX In reply to GaarasBabe [2008-08-05 16:08:59 +0000 UTC]

ok, sure! ill read over your stuff nah, i wont comment, all im gonna do is spell check and punctuation and stuff. maybe offer suggestions but only if you ask, i dont like to be annoying like that ^^

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GaarasBabe In reply to XxRavenUchihaxX [2008-08-05 21:18:34 +0000 UTC]

XD thanky you!

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XxRavenUchihaxX In reply to GaarasBabe [2008-08-05 21:20:31 +0000 UTC]

sure! just send me your story or whatever you want me to check out through note on DA and ill get back to you with my checked version, whenever you want ^^

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DasTierLockjaw [2007-10-27 04:07:46 +0000 UTC]

I feel so sorry for him! Id do anything (just about) To make him smile a little bit just at least once!

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Xanryu [2007-08-21 19:30:08 +0000 UTC]

wile-while

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ravenbb1116 [2007-07-12 06:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Whoa....I love the poem!! Awesome job!!!

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Ameko-Shadowsong [2007-05-21 22:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Amazing^^ The poem excellently expresses Gaara's hopelessness and his futile desire for his father's love, I think anyway. And the color is really cool^^

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Gaara-Sephiroth [2007-04-24 04:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Dang! That's pretty good! I like it!

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gaara13puppydog [2007-04-05 13:34:49 +0000 UTC]

WOW!You did a great job

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GaarasBabe In reply to gaara13puppydog [2007-04-05 15:43:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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GaarasBabe [2007-04-04 14:34:04 +0000 UTC]

full view

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