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jshepard19 [2018-12-17 04:30:55 +0000 UTC]
cute^^
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Matsu-sama [2015-07-15 19:05:05 +0000 UTC]
Veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Beautifull I love ♥_♥
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MineDayDream [2015-04-11 12:11:28 +0000 UTC]
Süße Idee und schönes Bild
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Zelgeist92 [2015-04-06 20:29:21 +0000 UTC]
And now it's time for something in-depth!
I think that you have done pretty good job at drawing sheets and pillows, they are looking good and natural. Especially folds, which are often giving me nightmares. Speaking of folds, the window reflection on the sheet looks brilliant. Gaara's and Matsuri pose is very tender. Gaara looks very protective here, while Matsuri clearly feels safe.
About mistakes and such, the hole in Gaara's nose probably went for a walk somewhere . While general pose is good, I can't understand Gaara's right hand here. It looks wierd, and without a purpose. It looks like he is holding air just below Matsuri's head. His other palm, however, is drawn pretty well. Also, proportions between Matsuri's thumb area and rest of her palm looks off.
I, however, forgot to mention that you handled lights and colours in this piece very well. Overall, I like it and I bet Kitsune likes it too .
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Gabychan91 In reply to Zelgeist92 [2015-04-11 15:36:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for this comment!
It makes me really happy to know that, sometimes I have the feeling that I draw too much folds on everything It's the first time that I tried such a thing like the window reflection and I wasn't sure that it would look good, so I'm really happy that you like it! When I first saw the reference, I loved the pose and I had to try to use it as reference for a gaamatsu drawing Since it was a birthday present, I wanted the drawing to look as good as possible (You know how I'm at war with anatomy and hands )
Hahaha I always forget Gaara's nose hole It's time that I make a mental note about that, thanks for telling me! You are right about Gaara's right hand, no matter how much I tried to improve it, I always ended up making it look worse I should really practice more with hands, and hopefully I will be able to improve his hand here as well
Now that you mention it, yep Matsuri's proportions on her hand are off (I'm not winning the war with hands lol ). Do you think it will look better if I move 'up' her whole 'thumb-zone' to diminuish the distance between thumb and her other fingers or make her 'thumb-zone' a bit smaller? With hands, I never know what to do
I'm really happy about that Thank you so much again for your feedback, it means a lot to me and it really helps me a lot too! With anatomy and hands, I treasure every advice I can get! So thanks for that
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Jinxprincess13 [2015-04-06 15:11:33 +0000 UTC]
This is so cute! I love it. Then again, I love all your work I've seen so far (I have a strong love of Gaamatsu and you have a lot of pictures, it makes me a happy bunny!) (and the anatomy's fine, darling, don't worry about it)
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Jinxprincess13 In reply to Gabychan91 [2015-04-12 18:01:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm new to the series as a whole. I've only really been in this fandom as of the beginning of the year, but I swear one of the first ships I picked up on in Shippuden was Gaamatsu and I just love it man...
I've been working on stories but none of them are coming out quite right XD
You're welcome!
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winniekay [2015-04-06 03:12:41 +0000 UTC]
This is so adorable!
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Kitsune1978 [2015-04-05 11:07:36 +0000 UTC]
I don't even know what to say Thank you SO MUCH! Don't be sorry, even if it's late it's still the first birthday gift I've got from someone on dA! It means so much to me!
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