Comments: 9
UnityBeing [2006-07-28 00:52:42 +0000 UTC]
beautiful, awe-inspiring and i feel as if you are awakening, within the visionary communion that your heart beats, upon the art of your tears and living liberation of our truth; to agree and united=+o)(i was a soldier of misery and a victim of a painful rage, peace is god's living water's reflection, the vision of compassion within our passion of esperança e forca
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Soldierofmisfortune [2004-10-12 14:08:46 +0000 UTC]
Hm... the preview is very nice but I would have chosen something a tad darker and more brooding, with more mist.
It works though.
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insanity-streak [2004-10-12 02:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Wow, i agree with the above, its very captivating writing! Can visualise the whole thing, really eloquently written, good job!
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Soldierofmisfortune [2004-10-11 06:37:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow, just... wow.
Brilliant. Once more you amaze me with your writing skills. Great work!
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icefyre45 [2004-10-09 20:28:40 +0000 UTC]
hmm, magical, enthralling. well done. well extended, good job *claps*
you portray the horror of the soldiers well, fear predominates instead of the valour expected of the situation.
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