Comments: 5
insanity-streak [2004-12-01 11:12:02 +0000 UTC]
Yeh wow, no story for ages but then this. Its really good! took a little bit to read but i'm impressed! Only critisism is maybe make paragraph breaks more obvious? So it doesn't look so daunting. but seriously, nice work!
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Soldierofmisfortune [2004-11-29 06:19:28 +0000 UTC]
It's (still) very good. Hope you do well with it.
By the way, I haven't seen very much new stuff from you lately. How's the writing going?
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Meepasaur [2004-11-29 00:53:22 +0000 UTC]
Well composed piece! excelent writing skills, indeed. poor horse..
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nino4art [2004-11-28 21:01:37 +0000 UTC]
uh well, i wish u luck
i cant say that i read all story, but what i read was awesome ^ ^
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