HOME | DD
Galeos — Untitled
Published: 2004-08-30 18:50:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
Redirect to original
Description
When everyone is grey and I turned to be the sameShe is also always grey, but grey is not a dull color, just need the right kind of shade
When Friday feels like the end of the week, holding a barrier within
When the feeling becomes something very unreal
It's that time when you can no longer express the true essence of your thoughts
When you try to rhyme using words…
Just doesn't work
When images float around your brain
You can't really explain
You use "him" instead of "me" to avoid that pain
That pain to think that "I" was wrong
Suddenly the inner "I" wants to move to Hong-Kong
My inner "I" could write about love all day
But "I" choose not to, this is not my way
My "I" tell me to do what it wants
My common sense tells me to "think about it, don't"
"My" was thinking to hold it up, wait until it's right moment to use
But then "I" reminded me that in life: "You snooze – you lose"
Comments: 2
Thanks pal. Love is one of my least favorite topics... and I have approx two, including this one, that concern love.
Cheers
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I like the last part the best. It´s a very interesting way of using... uh, I don´t know the gramatical term (you know, words like "I" and "he").
"Suddenly the inner "I" wants to move to Hong-Kong" is one of my favourite lines. Along with the ending:
"You snooze - you lose." How true. Especially when it comes to love.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0