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Published: 2015-04-04 20:23:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 804; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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I fellFrom the Heavens
Expelled
For my sins
Doomed
To live
Between the mortals
I am an angel
With broken wings
I can't fly anymore
I can only
Crawl
While I try to hide
My own misery
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religion is poetry too, everything is poetry you don't always have to know where it comes from
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I guess so. It comes out of anywhere.
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Thanks, I'm glad
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Sad as it is, this is actually rather beautiful - your use of words is lovely
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Thanks. I guess sad poems are my best poems.
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Most of my poems end up like that. These kinds of poems I find are a person's TRUE feelings, the feelings they have been keeping inside for a long time.
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I understand it. When we feel bad our true feelings tend to come out.
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It can also happen when you are extremely happy.
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It does. But these are less likely to be written down.
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True, but people might find it easier to write poetry about a bad emotion than a good one, much like a memoir.
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I sure feel that way.
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But hey, whenever life slams you down, you just have to try that much harder to fly above the obstructions, negative emotions, etc. One can't just let everything get them down, or else one's life is truely meaningless and they let down those who sacrificed so much for them.
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True. But we all have moments when the negativity gets the best of us for a while.
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Just the way things are...
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I'm really touched. A fallen angel's sorrow is one of my favourite themes in art.
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I'm glad it had such impact
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My heart is breaking for you, my friend
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That life between the mortals is something else, isn't it?
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It has its charm, I must say
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Were you writing this in relation to Easter?
Cause if you were I think it's blasphemy.
So that's why I don't think I like this poem.
I'm not trying to insult you.
But I just was upset with this,cause I don't like it when I see there's any hint of diminishing what Christ did for us.
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That was not my intention at all... It's not even meant to be a religious thing.
But thanks for your honesty.
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oh,ok then.>///< sorry for miss understanding
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It's OK. It was just your interpretation
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Reminds me of 3DG's Fallen Angel... And I think it goes fairly well with your graveyard pic.
Sometimes the random poems are the best. 
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Maybe the graveyard pic inspired this
Thanks. Randomness can give birth to some good stuff
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Thanks a lot
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No problem
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Well, thanks
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