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Nattael [2022-08-17 00:06:04 +0000 UTC]
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Nattael [2022-08-16 16:09:58 +0000 UTC]
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Taiwu-The-Bear [2018-06-08 00:08:21 +0000 UTC]
I'm so confused. I was reading your Night Shift series, but I don't know which story is in which order. One second its only Dipper getting transformed, and the next second, everyone is chill with Stan being a wolf too! Can you please tell me the order of the stories?
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Gin93 In reply to Taiwu-The-Bear [2018-06-08 00:43:47 +0000 UTC]
the opening (1-6), broken promise, the rest in the middle, weresoos is after stans been bitten
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Taiwu-The-Bear In reply to Gin93 [2018-06-08 02:47:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, I'm really dumb, but can you be more specific about "the rest in the middle"? And do you write about Stan being bitten? I'm only asking so many questions because I love your story!!!!
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Gin93 In reply to Taiwu-The-Bear [2018-06-08 03:06:29 +0000 UTC]
Stan is coming soon!
the ford journals are the middle, and the close call is after dippers attack on mabel
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LexLight92 [2016-05-27 20:51:10 +0000 UTC]
Nice fic!
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Graywolf120 [2015-09-05 05:24:41 +0000 UTC]
I must say sorry, not just to you but to me, for taking so long to read this. It is a very good start and the characters are spot on.
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Bry-Guy-1996 [2015-08-19 01:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Very good story
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Myrways [2015-08-17 10:59:48 +0000 UTC]
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90skid2386 [2015-08-11 18:44:46 +0000 UTC]
Is there a cure and Dipper hasn't found out what it is yet?
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Gin93 In reply to 90skid2386 [2015-08-11 18:54:31 +0000 UTC]
Hey hey
yes
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90skid2386 In reply to Gin93 [2015-08-12 01:28:57 +0000 UTC]
Awesome can't wait to read about how he will find it.
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Quite-Lovely-Puzzles [2015-08-10 06:17:39 +0000 UTC]
I really like it so far! The only thing I can recommend is that the formatting needs a bit of work. There were a few grammatical mistakes and whatnot, but those are easily fixed. I think it maybe be easier to read if you spaced it out a bit more and group the description together a bit more. Overall I really like the story and the only thing I can say is that the structure of your sentences could advance to make this better, though other than that I cannot wait for the next part
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Quite-Lovely-Puzzles In reply to Gin93 [2015-08-10 22:06:52 +0000 UTC]
I mean usually, it's more or less just a misplaced period or a minor mistake. I think even after you copy to DA you maybe can try to reformat it a bit there before posting. I have never really grown accustomed to writing on here, so I may not be the most knowledgeable. ^^" I personally don't think you should ask me to help you write better, but the only advice I have to give is to read more and learn from other's writing.
I feel like you should be confident in your own work. Re-read it and find what you don't like and what you do and then sculpt your style.
I think one thing about the fic, and be aware I may be being just a tad bit picky, is that the pacing at some places is a bit fast. I understand that it was used to tell HOW it must have felt, but it's just something I think you could improve on.
Please remember, I am not too much of a writer myself but I do advocate your work and hope you continue to improve! Don't take any of this personally and that some of this is just my own opinions. I enjoy a story that has plenty of figurative language and descriptions, balanced with just the right amount of dialogue. I have recently read a book that told many action scenes and whatnot in a very capturing way. "The Things We Carried" Is great at telling gruesome stories. I recommend it.
I apologize for the rambling!
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DipperPines4607 [2015-08-08 06:41:43 +0000 UTC]
Omg this is AMAZING i luv it please make more of this
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ShinjinotIkari17 [2015-08-08 03:16:48 +0000 UTC]
That is an excellent fic gin-chan
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