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GinzoMike — Chanrika-central park before-after draft
Published: 2013-02-03 16:43:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I was looking through some old photos and i hated that boat in the background but really liked how she looked so poof! boat is gone. Still a little rough around the edges.-Looking for feedback
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wow, where did the boat go?!? great job getting rid of it
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lol thanks! i deleted them from existence haha
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I'm sorry to say but i actually like the original better. It just seems more natural =/
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natural in what way? i felt the boat distracted the viewer from the 'model'. do you feel the editing is poor?
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and the hair looks kinda..how do you say it in english..gravy? i don't know how to explain it..in my language its ''masna kosa'' try googling it and maybe you'll understand xD
( i'm talking about edited picture )
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i think i understand, it looks maybe unnatural, too shiny, maybe even greasy
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greasy! thats the word i've been looking for haha
maybe you should try to make it more soft and smoother
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yea i agree, her hair was wet
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well no, the editing part is actually quite good. but since we saw the original and edited one its only natural that i feel that there is something missing under the bridge, and i personally like the boat, so maybe that's why i like the original one better..since there is no empty space in the background like in the edited one..
its just the matter of person's liking i guess..
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oh i see what you mean now. Thank you for thinking the editing is good, the point is to showcase my editing for use in my portfolio in hopes of finding work. So yes, people may disagree the boat should have stayed but the main reason is to show that i CAN take the boat away. Thanks again for ur input.
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You did a great job with the boat
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I don't know anything about pictures or editing them but you took a great choice by taking the boat out of there. It was hard to concentrate on the model with some people behind her. Try taking the people out of the bridge and check if you like it more, I guess if you want the model to stand out you need to clear anything that makes the observer curious and look away from her. This is just my opinion, I really don't know anything about photography so probably I'm wrong. Keep it up!
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Yes thank you, that boat really distracted the viewer from her. yes i think ur right about the people on the bridge, a friend of mine suggested the same thing. thanks again for ur comment
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Your photos look very good from my perspective. The bridge in the background adds a nice touch to the photos overall.
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