Comments: 21
Saphyrae [2016-07-13 05:08:35 +0000 UTC]
Hi, I'm here from ProjectComment
Nice drawing! Really well done, there's so much detail in this drawing! The colour scheme I think really emphasizes the shapes and brush strokes, instead of using potentially distracting colours - a good strategy for this particular style. The style itself is really awesome, I love how you used so many layers of colour for the shading, and the lines and edges are all so crisp! Really amazing job, technique-wise. Now, I have a little bit of criticism. Firstly, his moustache seems a little wrong - I'm not quite sure how, but it seems too light. Initially, I wasn't sure if it was a moustache or just shading. Secondly, the texture lines in his ear look a little bit like the texture you used for his hair. It's not much, but his ears look a little furry on the inside.
So, that's all the criticism I have! It's a very lovely piece, and I have to especially compliment the hair and eyes, which look very real! I also love the clever use of colours, like I said above. Very few colours, but the overall picture still seems bright! Looks like a sepia picture, actually. Anyhow, this piece was lovely to comment on, you're a talented artist!
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GloomyCrimson In reply to Saphyrae [2016-07-15 01:58:48 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Thank you so, so much for the nice comment. About the moustache, I already realized what could be in fact the main mistakes: one, that its color it totally out of the hair colour palette and the second one, the lack of detail, basically haha. But of course, you were right in that point . And I really didn't notice what you said about the ear, you have a good eye, thanks!
For the compliments, I'm so glad you liked this piece, I loved his eyes too And you're a talented commenter! It will help me a lot for the next time
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AimForrest [2016-07-12 02:10:20 +0000 UTC]
Really wonderful piece, I love the shading style!
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