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GlowsticksANDCoffee — An Unwanted Life page 3
Published: 2006-07-22 05:49:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 2513; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 34
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I really am kinda getting sick of this title. It's too bland. But anyway, WOOT! Page 3! I really think I can finsh this now, but we'll see. So is anyone confused as to what's going on yet? Huh? Ha. I feel like a god that can control anything and everything at the moment. But anyway, I would like to point out that this comic, if you couldn't tell, is fixed up on my computer on paint. Regular paint. That's why it sucks like that, cuz It's so restricting. Anyway, onto the dialogue for people who don't feel like full-veiwing the page.Regular print: talking
Italics: Thoughts
First panel-Sakura: Sa-Sasuke-kun!
Second panel-Sakura(thinking) Where did he come from?
Third/forth panel-Sakura: So, uh, Sasuke-kun how's it going? Eh..enjoying life as it comes?
Forth panel-Sasuke(thinking) Hm..What's up with her? She's acting strange...
Fifth panel- nothing at all. Except for the crikets chirping.
Sixth panel-Sakura(thinking) Boy of few words isn't he..?[meanwhile Sasuke just stares at her, as if observing her..in a creepy sorta way]
Seventh panel-Sakura: So, what brings you out here on a fine night like this? :nervously laughes then speaks in a smaller voice: It's kinda late....
Eighth panel-Sasuke: Hey, why are you acting this weird? Is something wrong? You never acted like this in front of me before. And really, don't you think I should be asking YOU why you're out here so late?
Nineth panel- Again nothing at all. Let's just say that Sakura is stunned to realize that her 'acting skills' aint working right now.
So that's it people. Sorry if Sasuke seem's a bit out of character, he's hard to work with. ><. But when he asks her whats wrong, he's only half concerned really :notice the stoic face: I can't have him acting nicer yet. Too early. But he does care though. Sakura is acting strange because...well...you'll fine out soon enough. Sorry for any grammer mistakes and the horrible backrounds. I don't have the patience with backrounds once or ever. Oh and if my dialogue is too confusing to follow, then stop being lazy and full view please.
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Comments: 17
I totally would continue this doujin if i remembered what it was about in the first place 
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okey well do your very very very best
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I have to read more....and it is your flat 👍: 0 ⏩: 0
LOL
i like the shading in the last 3 panels, the art too even, *tilts head* ... where does the plot lead? The world may never know-*shot!* sorry, bad pun!
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ooooooooo- wa, wa, waaaaaaaaaaaa!
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Why thank you ^_^ The plot WILL go somewhere..eventually. But I might redo the first 3 pages
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Its kinda funny when you said grammar mistakes you spelt grammar with an er instead of an ar. I know I'm that sad to think of that... Anyway good job I can't wait to see the next page.
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ah! whens the next one coming out? i wanna read more!
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Well, with school going on and all, the pages will be coming in veeery slowly. But I'm currently working on the 4th page so that might be up within two weeks
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ah i see i just hope its up soon ^^
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haha chirp chirp cricket cricket.....hahah genius XD
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pssssshhhhhhhhh
wtf man!
sorry glowstick, i dont feel like typin this all agin....
i had a nice long big paragraph and then it wouldnt submit and when i hit back it was all gone....
grrrrrrrrrr
ill tell ya it all later..
but good job!
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