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Published: 2005-12-16 04:37:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Pride


Stand tall
With head held high
As the sword swings down
Upon your pride.

Swallow your rebuttles
And plan for revenege
As the distance closes
Towards your throat.

One last victory
Over your captors,
As they smile and torture,
Mead in hand.

Fight back with clear eyes,
A blank fearless stare,
As you die only once,
Not a coward.
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Comments: 19

the-jkp [2005-12-25 10:01:19 +0000 UTC]

i just like ure poems

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GodlessVampire In reply to the-jkp [2005-12-25 16:38:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, it means a lot that you do.

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the-jkp [2005-12-24 21:48:56 +0000 UTC]

lol cant w8!!!

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GodlessVampire In reply to the-jkp [2005-12-24 23:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Glad you're excited.

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the-jkp [2005-12-24 17:20:00 +0000 UTC]

waheey go me!

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GodlessVampire In reply to the-jkp [2005-12-24 21:44:51 +0000 UTC]

haha, yeah!

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the-jkp [2005-12-24 16:32:37 +0000 UTC]

you should do 1 bout war i think u would b able 2 do a gud 1

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GodlessVampire In reply to the-jkp [2005-12-24 17:15:49 +0000 UTC]

I've done one, actually, but I'm editiing it and will hopefully be able to post it within a week.

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Vahn-Alexander [2005-12-22 02:35:13 +0000 UTC]

very nice, I like how incorperated part of the qoute into the poem.

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GodlessVampire In reply to Vahn-Alexander [2005-12-22 02:39:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, the quote is what inspired me so having it be incorporated into the poem was one of my goals.

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Vahn-Alexander In reply to GodlessVampire [2005-12-22 02:43:36 +0000 UTC]

well done

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GodlessVampire In reply to Vahn-Alexander [2005-12-22 03:02:25 +0000 UTC]

THank you again.

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Le-Xarius [2005-12-17 23:43:27 +0000 UTC]

very well written

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GodlessVampire In reply to Le-Xarius [2005-12-18 00:57:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, it's amazing how powerful the inspiration of a quote can be.

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Le-Xarius In reply to GodlessVampire [2005-12-18 07:23:07 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^_^

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the-jkp [2005-12-16 21:12:37 +0000 UTC]

lol ure poems are ace an capture life the world an gore

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GodlessVampire In reply to the-jkp [2005-12-16 22:54:45 +0000 UTC]

That is why I write.

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the-jkp [2005-12-16 18:26:03 +0000 UTC]

wow.........sum gud work keep it up!

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GodlessVampire In reply to the-jkp [2005-12-16 20:20:12 +0000 UTC]

I will try.

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