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Description Well... Duh! Sakura what did you think was gonna happen?

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In this page i wanted to give the impression of a "floating" moment... no text but you can imagine what's going on in their minds...

Naruto seems to silently tell Sakura "I know this is a trap... but here I am now... do what you want..."
And Sakura... initially intended to punch him as she usually does, but seeing him standing there, basically offering himself to her... she changes her mind...

(poor Naruto: a lifetime of rejection by Sakura... well he's pretty brave here... )


Very challenging page for me... i'm kind of satisfied but mostly relieved that's it's done...

Enjoy!

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Pairing : Naruto and Sakura (Narusaku)
Manga/Anime: Naruto
Story and Art: Gokfeuns
Characters: Masashi Kishimoto
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Comments: 34

KannaAsa [2014-01-01 20:28:37 +0000 UTC]

   

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Katgirl4life [2013-05-20 03:53:41 +0000 UTC]

What a beautiful moment I wish this was in the manga

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moonlitinuyasha1985 [2008-10-26 14:22:30 +0000 UTC]

This is too cue!

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MissMo3Rose [2008-10-21 23:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Must...know...WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! DDD'x

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Gokfeuns In reply to MissMo3Rose [2008-10-22 04:48:49 +0000 UTC]

Go find out page 10 is up

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MissMo3Rose In reply to Gokfeuns [2008-10-22 05:13:31 +0000 UTC]

WHAT AM I DOING HERE THEN?! I MUST SEE IT!!!!!!!!

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narusakurocks [2008-10-21 21:56:25 +0000 UTC]

O_O more

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CitrusCitrine [2008-10-21 21:17:20 +0000 UTC]

What's going to happen next!? Can't wait!!!!!!

I this doujinshi!

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Gokfeuns In reply to CitrusCitrine [2008-10-21 21:37:10 +0000 UTC]

Awww! thank you for this comment it feeds my creativity

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awsadness [2008-10-21 20:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Are you going to do a kiss scene?
I think you should!
Are you into yaoi?
Cause if you are you should do a comic to a story I'm writing.
Would you be interested in something like that?
It's AkuRoku (kingdom hearts).
The story won't be done for a while, but I pick you because I think you could do it!
I love your work and this page was great.
I see kisses in the future!!!!!!!

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Gokfeuns In reply to awsadness [2008-10-21 21:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Kiss? Yes
Yaoi? Yes
Would I like to do a comic of your story? Yes

Just let me know when the story's ready ^^ I would really enjoy that

Oh and thanks for the comment

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awsadness In reply to Gokfeuns [2008-10-21 22:12:24 +0000 UTC]

I know the story needs work, but I'm hoping you can fix it with the drawing.
First off here's what I have:
"Axel?" His voice was strained.(I want yo to make up what the Org's HQ looks like, but I want all the members to have their own rooms, and a kitchen and ect. I want Axel and Roxas to be in the Lobby when this scene takes place.)
"What is it?" I couldn't hide the worry in my own voice.
"What is this pain in my chest?"
"I don't know. You're not like the rest of us, Roxas. You have a heart. I don't." The pain in my voice was noticeable in my own ears. I knew he wasn't like us and one day he will return to Sora.
-Months earlier-
"Sora. Who is he?"( This takes place in Xemnas's office[make it up with your wonderful talent!!!]
"Roxas's other half. They will eventually meet and they will unite as a whole once more. You can't stop fate."
"No! This can't happen! He's not supposed to leave me! Dammit!" I hit the wall in Xemnas's office. I couldn't feel the pain in my left hand. No pain could compare to knowing that the one you love is going to be taken away from you just as soon as you find out he is the only one that can make you feel whole. Fate has a twisted way of screwing us all over. I hate this!
I was walking to my room when he crossed my path,"Axel?"
"Roxas!" My eyes widen in terror. I couldn't face him right now. "I'm sorry."
"Axel! Wait!!!" I started running towards my room. I couldn't look back at him. Not now, anyways.
-Present-
"Axel, as the leader, I want you to find Sora and kill him." (Xemnas's office again)
"No!" I couldn't do that to Roxas. If he wants to go back to his original body then who am I to stop him.
That's all I have and the () things aren't part of it, but they are notes about what I want to go right there, OK. If you will tell me what it needs then I will be happy to change stuff so it can be easier for you.
Oh and if you want to read my Pixie Stix for the Dead book some of the chapters are on my profile!
Thank you sooooooo much for doing this for me and I have a question.
Could you draw Axel and Roxas and send them to me so I can see how you draw them?
If I could even half-ass draw I would do this but I can't and I'm really happy you said yes!!!!!!
Sorry this was so long, but thanks again and I can't wait!!!!

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VscoArt [2008-10-21 20:42:04 +0000 UTC]

SAKURAAA~! NARUSAKU~! X'D , really is she going to do it? I WANNA SEE IT! PLEASE! I NEED THE NEXT ONE! >U< , Great WORK! YOU ROCKS!

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Gokfeuns In reply to VscoArt [2008-10-21 21:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Your enthousiasm is contagious!

Thank you your comments are very motivating

*draws faster* xD

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VscoArt In reply to Gokfeuns [2008-10-21 23:32:19 +0000 UTC]

X'DD No problem! Your Doujin is soooooooo~ cool! >u< and make me glad read it! ; YOU HAVE MY SUPPORT!

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haiku452 [2008-10-21 20:01:42 +0000 UTC]

NEXXXXXXXT*O*

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haiku452 [2008-10-21 20:01:14 +0000 UTC]

<3 it hahaha...naruto's so friggin sweet XD be brave naruto, be brave>,> lolz...you know...sakura would totally be the man in the relationship

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Gokfeuns In reply to haiku452 [2008-10-21 21:22:24 +0000 UTC]

In Sakuras words : "HELL YEAH!" XD

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tripflare18 [2008-10-21 19:59:30 +0000 UTC]

MMMMM-AZING

NUFF SAID

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Gokfeuns In reply to tripflare18 [2008-10-21 21:22:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Ann-shadow [2008-10-21 19:30:43 +0000 UTC]

I think she is gonna hurt him....

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Gokfeuns In reply to Ann-shadow [2008-10-21 21:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Again? is she really THAT cruel? XD

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Ann-shadow In reply to Gokfeuns [2008-10-23 10:08:43 +0000 UTC]

yessssss she is ^^

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tmacsmash [2008-10-21 18:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is some heavy stuff. Should be good.

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Gokfeuns In reply to tmacsmash [2008-10-21 21:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Thx Hopefully it will be ^^

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hellguard777 [2008-10-21 18:39:31 +0000 UTC]

she changed her mind O_o. So now what? *drools* pervy thoughts get out of my head ;_;.

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Gokfeuns In reply to hellguard777 [2008-10-21 21:31:56 +0000 UTC]

Ahaaa... patience... you'll see

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zwinkyaddicted [2008-10-21 17:58:25 +0000 UTC]

Be careful Naruto,that girl is dangerous and you know it

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Gokfeuns In reply to zwinkyaddicted [2008-10-21 21:34:34 +0000 UTC]

Hell yeah! she's a freakin' ninja! XD

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kyubifan [2008-10-21 17:54:55 +0000 UTC]

I love this hole doujin. Keep it gouing.

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Gokfeuns In reply to kyubifan [2008-10-21 21:32:24 +0000 UTC]

thx

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kyubifan In reply to Gokfeuns [2008-10-22 13:57:53 +0000 UTC]

NP

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Serika2001 [2008-10-21 17:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Oooooo! I love it and the art is beautiful! However, I find it to be very very evil of you to leave us a such an awesome cliffhanger, lol. Can't wait to see the next one!

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Gokfeuns In reply to Serika2001 [2008-10-21 17:07:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^
I know... I'm eviiiil XD

But I do post a page about every 15 hours so... not too cruel

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