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Published: 2007-12-28 08:02:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 494; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Not all dreams come true
Some perish away into the sands
Some are lost without clue
Some are just out of hands

We make our destiny we say
What accounts for the unknown?
The shocks that come our way
Some things are better not known

So says the butterfly
While the whistle blows
Under the sea it wants to fly
Sometimes dream flows

And in case it stops drizzling,
Those rocks still stand still
Just like that duckling
Which walked over the hill

Not matters the footprints
Whats gone is gone
In the age of fingerprints
No one escapes the unborn
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Comments: 16

dunnonuthin-gugs [2008-02-24 19:00:37 +0000 UTC]

very optimistic..!!!
great job...!!!
peace!!!

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sempiterna [2008-01-22 18:07:38 +0000 UTC]

I have a poem called mind over matter so I know what you mean with this

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dreadz [2008-01-14 19:10:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, scenic picture, I'd say you were standing far with a zoom feature so you wouldn't go crashing into the waves.

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dreadz [2008-01-14 19:09:22 +0000 UTC]

You could also put it this way and still connect with it:

It's matter over the mind, which matters in the mind, for that matter is what the mind means to matter with. I love your works. This is so touching, and so true at times. Words and thoughts work the same way, they get lost in our subconscious after awhile, but they can be recovered, dreams are much more difficult then that. Take care, can we collaborate on here sometime? Or do you as well prefer to work alone.

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Rockonteddy [2008-01-04 16:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Pretty deep with this one Sujatha ........ I like it! .........
Pete


Hope my pictures still inspire you a little .........

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goodgirlie In reply to Rockonteddy [2008-01-05 07:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Hey of course yes! Your pictures are always an inspiration to me! Its just that since I started taking some pictures lately i am experimenting on them...

Your photography is one of the best works I have ever liked!

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Rockonteddy In reply to goodgirlie [2008-01-06 22:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Thats what I like to hear! .......... will we see some more of your pictures? .........
Pete

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goodgirlie In reply to Rockonteddy [2008-01-07 13:39:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes, will get capturing some more...

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Rockonteddy In reply to goodgirlie [2008-01-08 15:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Well! Funny that you should mention that! ......... I have been waiting for my new camara to arrive, lo and behold it arrived this morning!!!! ........ so I have been spending some time reading the manual......... but will be out and about with it soon!! ......... ......
Pete

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regeneratingzombies [2007-12-31 02:09:59 +0000 UTC]

nice1

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strangeillusion [2007-12-30 02:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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flame-fist [2007-12-29 20:43:28 +0000 UTC]

i dont exactly get it (probaley because I am more muscle then anything) but i do like it

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xXKallieXx [2007-12-29 06:07:15 +0000 UTC]

thankyou for your comment
and yeah its meant to be broken as you say, its an open poem so not much structure there
and I like this poem of yours, very symbolic
thanks again!
xx

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leztahdarkknight [2007-12-29 05:22:48 +0000 UTC]

nice...

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zhaky [2007-12-28 11:15:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure I understood it all, but it was very nice, and yet again I love the way you use your words

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TygerGurl [2007-12-28 09:21:58 +0000 UTC]

ooh, I like this one alot. I don't have any specific reason, I just like the wording and the message you convey. nice job =^_^=

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