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GothicRaine1712 — Mello x Near- The bet
Published: 2010-11-23 23:18:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 5262; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 201
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I spent so many hours on this, I am sick with the flu, I am dizzy, but heck this was worth it!
They look so cute~! I can't believe I did a manga page...ok It's not pro-looking, but It's mine and it's my first!!
Please be kind with me TTuTT
critiques, onegai?
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the line art on the picture is impressive for a start, and has a professional feel to it, and I also love how you've drawn the characters.
the tones on the picture were done pretty well in general.
the first two panels i like when it comes to the tone, and i especially like the last panel. the only thing i don't like about the last panel is the middle part of the picture where you see some of the bubbles cut off a bit, but other than that i love it.
I also like how i want to read this if it was a whole doujin, even though i've only read the one page ^^
In general, the page is very well done, my only problem is the middle pannel, because i don't like how some of the bubbles were cut off, but apart from that i love the page and i think it was VERY well done, especially considering this was your first manga page ^^ <3
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oh my god, this was my first critique EVER! XDDD
Thank you so much!! TuT
I didn't notice the bubbles thingy, so you pointing it out was great help~! I need to pay more attention from now on ^^
Thank you so much!!!
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your welcome!!! >w<
this is the first time i've ever critiqued someones work ;3
i glad my advise was great help TTwTT *tears of joy*
good luck with future artwork (^0^)/ <3 <3 <3
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so cute and sweet. I wonder what the bet was, and who lost it, was it Mello?
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some shadow would be nice.. XDD or.. get help from a how to draw manga book.. XD
nevertheless.. *nods* it's cute.. and clean... so.. thumbs up for your work~!! XDD
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I don't have a problem with shadows, I just wanted it to look clean, with only basic shadowing~
Thank you ^^
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blink blink.. i didn't mean that....
XD oh.. never mind.. i still like it... cleaner.. as you say.. XDD
gomen.. just suddenly spurted out.. since i was reading manga...
maa.. nvm
still.. kawaii drawing XDD
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TTuTT
you make me so happy! Thank you TUT
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awwwwhh u make me happy just by saying that
ur welcome(:
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hello~ ^^
hm. it's very cute, i like how clean your lines are. i suppose for now, you could focus on drawing Mello with a certain "style"? XD he looks too vastly different between the first and last panel. @v@;
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ah, I know ^ ^;;;
They both look more 'kiddy' in the last panel 0w0;
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awww TuT
Thank you so much!
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owwww! TTuTT I'm so happy you like it! <3
Thank you very much : >
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hahaha! Your welcome
ow???
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awwww TTuTT
Thank you so much!!! I'm so happy... ;u;
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Hehe You're welcome!!! hehe ^_^
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